short but brilliant :) ...

a little confusing- but not bad. Could you try Aro/Bella?

Oh yay, someone else likes Edward/Tanya... or at least writes it. ;)

This was gorgeous. I love how you can say so much about both characters in so few words, and you have some really pretty language - it's descriptive without being smothering. Great job.

This is beautifully written. I love it! Keep writing :)

How poetic.

Its nice to see another Edward pairing. Being hit over the head with Bella and Edward's love in the book gets old so seeing Edward/Tanya is interesting and a breath of fresh air.

I love your writing, its descriptive but not too flowery and real poetic.

Wow that was so good.

I never could have imagined Edward and Tanya.

So great.

hm i would like to see a Mike and Bella Pairing. if you please.

you should read my story and review it please.

Much love