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| Lenore 2008-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseEdmund/Lucy rock! even though it's incest, the couple is great, indeed. why didn't you finish the story. it's lovely. |
| sent in hell 2008-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abusewow i just love this story!! please update, it's too damn good!! |
| AliThompson 2008-08-31 ch 1,  | abuseomgsh! why in the world di you stop!! u were doing so good! this story was so hot and the way that u started it was awesome! please please continue! the lucy/edmund is great but its not so great the way u ended them! u can do so much more!! plus i would really like more susan/peter because they r so hot together! please update soon! good luck in all that you do and God Bless! ~alithompson |
| talking-hat 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseUpdate this, please. I love Ed/Lu fics. :) |
| Mell.Russell 2008-07-11 ch 2, | abuseHi! I want to read more */* i konw, like Peter said, is inmoral but, for me doesn't matter in a fic, so please write soon this storie is really good and sweet and i can understand Edmund, he is jealous but...Lucy is right, he can't do anything... well... Good Luck PS: I usually don't speak or write in english, so...sorry T.T |
| Princess Lucy 2008-07-04 ch 2, | abuseyour characters are OC,plus that's wrong and tv wasn't invented |
| MaDShiPPA 2008-07-02 ch 2, | abuseWow, someone's her own boss. |
| Don-Jam 2008-07-02 ch 2, | abuseO, Edmund and Lucy, what to do weth you. It was marked correctly this time, Thank You. |
| Mami.K.Always.Narnia 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseWow!>... i loved it... keep updating! |
| Don-Jam 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat 'Sheila B' say, but I do Like it. Thank You, and Please write more. |
| SilverrAngell 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThis story looks interestingly...weird. They're all really OOC, from Peter and Susan's kiss to Lucy's yelling to Edmund's meanness. Ok, I can understand his anger at the end, where he thought Peter was gonna kiss Lucy, but the rest seemed a bit unnecessary. You might want to label this as an OOC fic. But you've got me hooked! Update soon :) |
| darkchristine 2008-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abusewow this is really interesting! post another chapter please! |
| DaizyEvans 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseKeep writing, can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon! :) |
| ravenkorine 2008-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abusei love this so much! it's really interesting. please carry on with the story! |
| Bologna121 2008-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abusevery nice. I liked it. The emotions were so high...it was really intense. |