i LOVE this story. Please update ASAP!

i lvoe it update asap

aww can't wait for more update aSAp

good chapter & more please

I'll be happy to edit this story for you. If you want to take it down maybe I can edit what you have already posted then you can re-post it when it's all been corrected. Just let me know.

i loved it and i would be happy to edit for you if you would like just let me know if you still need someone to look over it update aSAP

this is really good i can't wait for the next chapter

i lvoe it updaet sap. and yeah i noticed some mistakes in this. lol. but i get that you're looking for an editor

good chapter & more please

aw so good i want you to continue ASAP can't wait for more

well, im not quite sure yet. i am intrigued by this idea. that's for sure. =)

please continue please continue please continue. luke and lorelai alone at sea foe four weeks, just imagine what they could get up to. heheheh so keep going.

I actually think it would be perfect to end it right there. Lorelai jumped, nothing else is needed.

I'm not saying this because it's bad, I'm saying this because it's exactly right and anything more would be overkill :-)

You've got my interest. Keep going.

Yes, this does need editing, and I shall be happy to do it. You have a good idea and a good storyline, something I look forward to reading more of.
Just let me know if you need a beta. :)