this is a great first chapter, cant wait to read more and find out the rest of the story's plot.

hey,

this is a great story..i hope that you are going to continue to add to it..

you have captured the charaters emotions really well.. for someone that hasn't see

these episodes.. :)

hope to read more soon..

thanks for writing

cathy :)

Intruiging...

Am curious to know when the supernatural will kick in, and in what form. Apart from that, your description of a broken PJ was spot on, even if it did break my heart. I'm also glad you have Nick and Tom around to help look after him, Chris too.

Keep it coming.

C