very cute and sweet.

Excellent. Nice to see a Teyla's POV, she's often missed in fan fiction. Thank you for sharing (not so scary huh! :))

Great start but ah, I think you meant Post Pardom Depression, if you are talking about women becoming depressed after giving birth. Natal refers to the nose, as in Post Natal Drip which is very uncomfortable and gives you a sore throat.

Or maybe you mean Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome/Disorder which would be acurate if you are talking about Teyla being depressed over Kanaan's death. The baby would remind her of Kanaan thus making it hard for her to see her baby.

Like I said tho, great start! Great pairing too!