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| OnlyANorthernSong 2008-09-13 ch 1,  | abuseI've never seen the show, but I really liked this story. Might get me hooked : ) |
| bonez1925 2008-09-01 ch 1, | abuselol... that was a nice ending. I really liked the story |
| Miles333 2008-08-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! I loved the ending! Miles3 |
| Tera Hunter 2008-08-05 ch 1, | abuseOkay, that is FREAKIN' hilarious! LOL, it's totally Mikey, too! I loved the way you handled the characters, the fight, and the scenes. Beautiful. Keep it up! Luffs, TH. |
| Tori Angeli 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseWow...wow! After trudging through so much wangst, this fic danced perfectly along the line of drama without ever crossing it, pulling off the unexpected hurt without overdoing the comfort and keeping its tongue firmly in its cheek the entire time! I was really surprised to find this! Great job! I wish you'd write more TMNT! |
| Eridani23 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI loved this fic! I hope you write more. And I agree that the turtles (Splinter too) are tough to write, but you did them wonderfully! ;) |
| LeaMarie F. Metallium 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this one. I hope you keep writing more like it! |
| Storm Princess 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh I love this, it is SO Mikey! Just like him to think he has brain damage just 'cause he got smacked a couple times. Well, okay it was more then a couple but still... |
| winged-monkey 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! Mikey really made me laugh and you did well with all of the other turtles as well. Great job (and please make your friend realize that NONE of the turtles have a yellow mask ^.^) |
| Sassyblondexoxo 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved this. LOVED IT. I usually go for the darker, serious stuff, and it takes a lot for a humor piece to impress me. You took a great idea, ran with it, and couldn't have pulled it off any better. My favorite part was Mike saying he was lucky that Raph didn't give him mouth to mouth...I about died. And I thought that your characterizations were great. Mikey, of course, his typical toon self...but especially Leo, being inwardly blaming of Raph, but trying to keep it pulled together none the less. Great job. I hope that our little fandom can keep you sucked in for another story - i'd love to see something longer from you. Oh, and check out the TMNT Stealthy Stories website, if you're looking for more TMNT famous fanfic fun (there, have some more alliteration!) ~SASSY ~SASSY |
| Becca T 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI thought this story was absolutely spot-on! Your characterizations were just great, no need to worry about that. This story is an instant favourite. I really, really hope you write more, I'll certainly be looking out for more from you. |
| Diamond-Of-Longcleave 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was so cute! Loved it! |
| Demi4yah 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseFor someone who writes Lotr you did fantastic! You portrayed everyone's character effectively which made it seem real. I loved every second of it especially the ending! Haha! you gotta love Mikey! Rap so deserved it! I really hope to see more from you! |
| XxZWINKYxX 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseaah hahahahaha that was so good! i loved every second of it! nice story! ZWINKY |
| antiHEROine82 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! Your characterization seemed spot on and your wording was descriptive. I could totally see every action and hear every word being said. And the tension between Leo & Raph was well-described and very accurate to how they feel about each other when events such as this happen, particularly pointing out how Leo constantly blames Raph. And the ending was fab! Made me LOL! I liked this alot! Great job! |