It was a nice surprise to come home from school (after studying for Chemistry exams all day D:) to find an alert for one of your fics sitting in my inbox!
I adored this chapter- it's so poignant and sad and I absolutely love all the imagery you use, especially that of the sea and towards the end- it's so beautiful. I think you explore the angsty side of the relationship beautifully.
I have read this twice now- there are many layers here and it so very consistent- the silence is so palpable when reading this. You seem to have gift for creating an atmosphere and tone throughout the whole piece. I'll be looking forward to any future fic! Hope you are well!
Gawd, you cannot even begin to imagine how much I’ve missed you! I’m glad I finally found a way to get my updates to myself and review without internet –sweatdrop- makes me proud, you know? You can’t imagine some of the things I found in my inbox, I can’t believe I ever had the audacity to deal with some of those writers –headdesk-, though that must sound pretty fucked up DX. Anyway, on to the ACTUAL review to my fantastical friend who writes me some of the best angst and other crap two XDD
I think this part ‘Naruto ejaculated heatedly’ was probably the most inappropriate time to place this word as it had me cracking up for about five minutes before I continued (yes I know, Im a perv if that made me laugh but the timing was totally random! AND I LOVED IT XDD). I loved the end of the first one, though I am a TINY bit confused? Naruto’s the one who said “I like you.” Right? And I liked that you ended it right there, though I bet you got complaints about that. It was just the right time to end that specific little oneshot thing, huh?
Aw, what brought on the sudden cat story? You have a cat, don’t you? Only a cat owner would understand the little unique ways of a cat, like the twitching tail and the mistaken biting XDD Wow…poor Sasuke (The real one), talking in third person XDD That was a cute ending.
Wow…about that last one. Wow…it was good, it really was. I loved it…maybe you could tell me though, I don’t quite understand the very last line? I think I might understand? Nothing in his eyes, no uh…whats the word…surrender in them? He wasn’t, as he never is, willing to continue, or give in to the plea? Lovely writing, and gawd did I miss it XDD Just the right amount of fluff in all of them, and just the right touch of angst in the last one
Oh, OH! I loved the first one! The abrupt ending made me smile like a mad idiot :D Most people would go on with the dramatics and have them express their undying love for each other... but the 'I like you' was so much better than the cliched 'I love you'. So much more realistic and calm. I really needed that.
And if I thought the first one made me smile...the second one just made me look stupid. Seriously, that was just the cutest thing ever! Poor Sasuke-both of them! But it's so much fun to read about him and his huffy ways :D The name part caught me off guard and had me smiling all over again.
I don't know what to say to that last one... it left me breathless at how simple, and yet utterly intriguing it was. I couldn't tear my eyes off of the screen; it was just that interesting. At first I thought that Sasuke had gone blind-ya know, cuz of the sharingan-but then I realized that wasn't the case at the end, and got interested again. But then it ended D: and now I'm sad because you're going on Hiatus! Damn, and now I'm dreading sophomore year more than I did freshman year...
-sighs contentedly- Yep, that was just what I needed. I felt like sh*t before, but now I'm not feelin' too bad after that. Thanks again so much for such enjoyable onesies -hugs- (I wonder if I faved this before...) Good luck with school!
Oh, wow. This first one was beautifully written, as usual. And the ending was sweet. I like how much of an enigma Sasuke is, and then how he just comes out and says it. . How kawaii! And so perfect.
I loved the second one. Namesake! XD It is hilarious that he named the cats after themselves. Seriously, that would be one hell of a third person complex. (That doesn't even make sense, does it? XD)So cute. All four of them. I liked the twist ending, especially.
Oh, Sasuke's blind. That's very sad. And he doesn't want to feel anyone's touch. Not even his partners. Depressing, but so intense.
I loved them all. All brilliantly composed with a twisted sense of love in each. (Obviously twisted whenever Sasuke is concerned. :P)
I'm sad you'll be on hiatus, but good luck with your school work. That comes first!
T_T Still as bad as it was the first time-but in a good, heart wrenching, painful way xD Well, since this story is going into my favorites, I thought I might as well leave a review too! I'm afraid I've grown bored of TONFA, so I will probably follow your works on here now! Good thing too, since you update on here first! Now I can read it SOONER! Yay! -coughs- (excuse the stupidness) Ah, the wonders of angst. I love it so! And you for making it so wonderfully painful to read! X] So beautiful TAT -love-
Wow, the second one was really sad and intense. And the first one was sweet, poetic really. Though for both of them I didn't know it was Naruto's pov until halfway down. It just seemed like it could e both until more specifics were given or a name was mentioned.
And I have to say I like the first one better. Because I can definitely imagine Naruto ending up with Sakura if Sasuke never came back, because they could share each other's pain of loss. But I still don't like it. NaruSaku is just so odd and out of place. But great stories.
Whenever you get the next one up, I don't mind, but I'll be waiting once again. Just promise that you'll keep these up. I like all the different unconnected stories. They're good. You're an excellent writer!
Aw they were all so swet! Sorry it took forever to read, but your gone one week and your inbox is full! Course, I didn't try and catch up everyday Anway, love these three cant wait for more! Your faithful reader and reviwer
Ah, this is just too cute. I love these little connected stories. They're lovely. Please do continue! They're just so sweet and nice. No drama or action, but just every day to day things that make up life. I absolutely love them! Please, please continue them! XD
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