Love it! Btw, 'Aussy' is actually spelt 'Aussie' just from experience. I'm a Kiwi, but half of my rellies live over the ditch! [Translation: I live in New Zealand, but my cousins etc. live in Australia (:] Funny, I never really took Finn as a 20 kid kinda guy:) lolz. I love how it's written.
-Chocolate Fishy

The plot is interesting, but you're execution is lacking. There are several odd word choices and grammar snafus that makes it somewhat hard to read. My suggestion is to edit or get a beta. Outside of that the story is unique and has a lot of potential.

please update

ugh . chad michael murray's so hot . especially in gilmore girls, but then he was gone after like 5 episodes . gaah . whutever thoe . i like logan better , but then they ended the fckn show right after he proposed & she said no .

lol . but yeaah , anyways , cute story . update ? (:

I am really enjoying reading this story. Love that the wat Logan and Rory met was different tan most other stories. Please update soon I really miss this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

please write more!

I feel like I'm flipping through one of Selene's romance novels instead of a fanfic here Jas that's how good it is.

The ending statement is a tad of a cliche but that's alright. Life is full of cliches anyways.

-Dark

I really liked this chapter don't ask why for I don't even have the answer to that.
It was entertaining to read.
You seemed to add a bit of your personality into Rory, if I read her completely, all worrying over the little things like climbing over a balcony.

-Dark

Did I ever thank you for asking me to read your work?
If not thanks it's way more fun than what I was doing earlier.

Alright back on topic,
I liked how they met up really conveniently in public rather than back at the apartment like cliches where they are all alone for...'coffee'.

It was going well but then she started speaking about mama Lorelei Gilmore and it got awkward for me. Because I don't think one speaks of one's parents right off the bat but it isn't that big a deal if it's in character.

Again don't watch the show so I can't say if they are in character or not. Sorry.

-Dark

This first chapter is really good Jasmin.
A little too blabby about New York but then again... It's New York everyone likes to think it's special.

Just one question, is his last name really Huntsburger?

I was just thinking how irrevocably silly that is.

-Dark

Great writing! It's so sad that Tristan died so young like that. I like the Rory-Logan relationship so far, you've done it well! Update soon please!

I love this story... I am waiting for an update. Will it happen soon?

Well then.. haha. I was not expecting THAT.
But don't worry, it's in a good way. :)

Update when you can, please!

wow thats sad! you killed off tristan!

this is an amazing story, and i can't wait to see where you take it! please continue soon

Cheers
Michelle

well that was a bit sudden but i am interestet in how this plays out...