Oh man. I teared up a little during the Rosalie conversation.

I loved that she tasted her own blood. I'm not even sure why really, but I just loved it. :D

I loved it !
I loved every single word of it XD
It's a shame you're not going to continue =(
I must admit that I liked the chapters written from EPOV better.
And believe me, I know exactly what you mean when you say Edward's point of view is easier to write from than Bella's ... I'm experiencing it myself at the moment xD
But anyway, this is AWESOME ^_^ !!

Loved it! So much and I loved all the detail!

This is the first fanfic of yours that I have ever read. And I truly enjoyed it. I thought Bella and Edward were incredibly sweet and believable. I also enjoyed that you added the conversation between Alice and Bella, as well. I have always wondered what would have happened had Bella simply chosen to become a vampire verse HAD to or die. Thank you so much for this story. Did you continue this story?

Y'know, I really think I like your version of Bella's change better than SM's. Seriously. Your take is so raw, so emotional, and we got to see Edward's take on the process as well. Furthermore, I like that there's no Renesmee (that bit really bothered me for some reason in BD). Absolutely beautifully written, I really enjoyed it. And sorry I didn't review the first 4 chapters... I was in such a hurry to keep reading. *sheepish grin*

Oh god, this made me cry. Really, really beautifully written!

this is really good !

i like the conversations with the family. that was really nice

You know, after reading your story, I realized how DRAMATIC Breaking Dawn was... Not that I'm complaining of course, SM is brilliant but it lacked the simplicity that your story gave us. It's just about Edward and Bella. About loving someone enough to walk the walk, take the plunge. That was my favorite part about your rendition. It was just about them taking this final step.
I agree with your post note...this story is complete. But PLEASE feel free to continue with others. :-)

Really well done, you really pinned down the emotions of the characters, and I think you have done the best job on Edward of any other person doing fanfic. I actually think your description of the transformation is better then Stephenies (blasphemy, I know).

so something threw me off about this chapter. are you going by the books or deveating some? not that i mind but i was just wondering because of this part :

"He had Sam’s image of finding her on the forest floor, broken and wet, forever printed in his memory, and in turn it had been burned into mine.

That day when he’d shown up at our school to taunt me had been the worst. He’d pictured everything that had gone on while I was gone in his mind, knowing that I could see it and hear it almost first-hand."

in the book it was Jake that came to the school not Sam. so just thought i would let you know that. but im really lovein this story so far!

I think I like this better than Stephenie Meyer's version. This was fantastic! I stayed up very late to read your creations. I really enjoyed them...I will probably read more another day!

This is really fantastic!

great story and i think that was indeed a perfect place to end

Gosh. You left me wanting more.

But all in all, that was really wow.