uhoh Jaspers gna kick sum1s but

wow, really like this one-shot! i wonder what it would've been like if this was actually in the book...haha, i would've been even more mad with BD i'm sure. alice was my favorite! (besides edward of course) good job :)

Ok, so I read these stories backwards….. But non the less; it was still sad to read. Alive giving up her “always right” status?? Nice!!
:D

Oh my gosh that made me soo sad. Beautifully written one shot truly amazing. I hope Alice doesnt die in BD.

WOW, thats so sad, I hope that doesnt happen in the book! You do a great job writing Alice!!

very nice

aras

That's soo sad! I hope she doesn't die in the book. That was a good chapter.