 Liila6241 2009-02-28 . chapter 6bravo! brava! |
 rolypolyolie 2009-01-22 . chapter 6 huh?what?he died? well that's depressing.tisk tisk, no self control. you could have done something more original with the plot, but I'm not gonna tell you what words to write. overall, kinda ubrupt, but otherwise good, sad but good |
 Schlem0 2008-10-12 . chapter 6 First of all, YAY for twincest! It was a bit of an abrupt ending, but it was a fantastic story. I didn't mind the Yuki getting stabbed thing in chap 5 (I absolutely can't stand her). I kinda wish it was longer though. Kudos, you just made my day a whole lot brighter. |
 NekoDoodle 2008-08-08 . chapter 6This was simply just, simply -giddy grin-. Thank you so much! for writing, really it was a unique and good story. |
 Rubescent Water 2008-07-24 . chapter 6Quite a..uh...surprise. Well, at least they kissed!! Great chapter, lovely ending to a wonderful story. I didn't know it was going to end so quick! I thought it was going to have more chapters. Oh well. I really loved it.
:)
~Glozinga~ |
 GoddesOfWrath 2008-07-24 . chapter 6You should put this under tragedy! |
 MysticMaiden 18 2008-07-24 . chapter 6Well ilike how everything was goinh but sorry i kinda felt ending was depressing and unfair to both of them.But im not a great fan of unhappy endings so i guess it was ok. |
 kutoki 2008-07-24 . chapter 6I wanted to cry. Poor Zero and ichiru. |
 kutoki 2008-07-21 . chapter 5There needs to be more ZeroXIchiru stories like this. I want to find out what happens next so please update soon. ^^ |
 Rubescent Water 2008-07-19 . chapter 5What a surprise, Ichiru tried to stab Yuuki!! I was quite shocked, good thing Zero got there intime!! You really did leave us on a cliffhanger, I want to know what happens next!!
Continue soon!! Continue soon!!
:)
~Glozinga~ |
 xXkeii-chanXx 2008-07-19 . chapter 5no! cliffie >.<
that was a great chapter! *gives you cookies*
i understand ichiru! i cant stand yuuki too =.=
-keii-chan |
 GoddesOfWrath 2008-07-18 . chapter 5i was like"D8 no Ichiru don't kill Yuki!" because im one of the ones who can stand her! i like her! she isn't bad,though i can't say i care when someone tortures and kills her off in a story...but why?! EVIL CLIFFHANGER! |
 GoddesOfWrath 2008-07-18 . chapter 4hmm i think Ichiru got a little crushed at what Zero said...CONTINUE PLEASE!^^ |
 WeasleyTwinsGirl86 2008-07-15 . chapter 4omg omg omg!!
You must continue!!
Please update soon! |
 oztan 2008-07-14 . chapter 4Poor Zero. |