This was really good. I don't like Takada, but this fic made me feel sorry for her, especially the part about her being used, and that freight truck is her burial site-that's so scary. I like that you mentioned Takada being tired of reporting murders and robberies...it made me look at her a different way. It made me understand a little, why she was proud to announce Kira and his plans for justice. I'm no fan of Kira or Takada, but reading this made me think of her differently. And yes, it's very frightening that he won't save her, he'll just save his butt (as he's been doing all along) and eliminate anyone who gets in his way or who might be able to reveal that Light Yagami is Kira. And in the end, Takada is naked and used-sexually, emotionally, in all kinds of ways. Great job and very well-written!

I love the way you write. You reach a level of emotion on your stories than mine evr have (seeing as I've never exactly tried real hard at it).
I'm bad at closing comments...um...you rock. Keep writing.

Mello! Awesome fanfic! Kiyomi Takada IS a stupid woman :p TOTALLY deserved it.

I love it!

WOW, poor Takada!I feel so sad!!But a wonderful story!

I liked how the title of the fanfic fell into sync with the actual story. Nothing makes me madder than a title that doesn't fit. I liked the fic but I think it could have be fleshed out a bit more :p

Not sure if they accept my name...excuse the numbers. Well, I absolutely love it...even though she so deserved it. She was a stupid woman! Anyway, another great work of art you have here. Now make it go BOOM!

Well...

Takada hmm? Can't say I pity her, cause she was easily duped...but I can say I identify with her, cause if I had been her, I'd probably accept his offer too.