Hoho

Was very funny, poor Rin... but maybe she was sleep very good! Well was very funny and for this I wonder if you let me translate your fic to spanish.

I wait for a answer, kisses Bye

This was pretty funny. Rin was very Rin-ish. And funny drunks are fun.

XD You cannot resist the Manji!

"Unconsciously, her eyes travelled lower" XD Bad Rin! Stop ogling the unconscious drunk! Even if he is damn sexy :D

This is awesome! It's funny and it's in character and it's the best Blade fic I've read to date.

Not bad, not bad at all. I really enjoyed your style and the story.

Haha...

the fleas...sour smell...eww!

I just started reading the manga like today...and I kept wondering why is Manji so scrubby looking. Now i finally found out the reason.

hahahahaha I love this story so much i was laughing and giggling threw the whole thing so hard i almost fell off my excercise ball!:D hehehe hope you write much more!

That was great fic _ Had me grinning througought the entire thing like an idiot. I say Rin got her mission complete PLUS an eyeful.

LOL! That was funny I really enjoyed reading it *laughs* XD Great job, I like your style _

::Falls over laughing:: I can actually picture this happening! Please, you have to do another one, that was wonderful! One small, little critique... ::Sobs:: It was to short! I really cannot find anything wrong with it. Keep up the good work!

Very nice! I enjoyed reading it very much!

OK it's good with Rin probably having a crush on her... annoying protector but then again Rin is a young girl with a mudered family and a immortal protector so how more mess up a life can you get?

Anyway I hope to read more (correction I'm reveiwing the other fic right now)

Wolf

Hi,

I just finished reading this, it's great. I found it cute, humorous and the interaction between them sizzles. At the beginning you seemed to be struggling to find the tone of the piece, but I think you found it by the end. I would love it if you continued writing these stories, they're a great, quick read!

It's cute. That's all I can say. Nicely done. So cute!

It definitely worked. I love it.