Very good chapter. I liked the ending a lot. I think you did a very good job capturing Thea's shallowness and Martha's nervousness about her father and the beatings.

I like this a lot. They are short, but they couldn't be much longer without losing their meaning. You have down the prompts really well and I can't wait for the next chapter :)

I really like what you did with "sharp." It was really great that you tied in the music. Very nice. I also like Georg's sort of insecurity. It really was very well done. Keep it up.

I'm really enjoying these little stories. I think my favorite so far is chapter 3. Please continue writing these, especially about Hanschen and Ernst. They are my favorites. But you have characterized most everyone well. I am a little unsure about this last chapter. Its good, but something seems a little off about Wendela. I'm not sure what, sorry. But really, very nice job. I'm looking forward to more.

I like this chapter. It took me a minute, but I really got into the characterizations. I like how Hanschen started staring just to make Ernst spaz (spazz?) out. I loved the last line, too.

Keep it up, por favor!

I thought the characters were very fitting for when they were older, but their personalities were a bit too developed for a young age. That said, I liked the concept of Mortiz and Melchior becoming friends that way.