aw, i loved it! more more more!

Geez, by the time Lulu had cast all those spells, the Bandersnatches (unless there were more than 10 of them) would be dead. Realistically, that is. But in the context of a fanfiction, it's kinda meaningless, so I'll skip that.

A lovely Lukka! (Say that five times quickly. XD) It's not the usual mush, it has emotion, honesty, and they're in character.

By the way, option d) at the start was excellent. I'm so using that insult. "He has the IQ of a rusty shovel."

8.5/10

HM

aw great oneshot. I like the part when Lulu tried to explain why she pulled away. it seemed like something she would od.Great job!

KathleenDee

aw! how sweet!