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shadowphoenix101
2008-11-24 . chapter 2
Uhm, so is this just a lil thing and this aint a fic? Hm okie dokie.

Im not sure what to say about this only that its a good way to express pain. I dunno that sounds lame Lol. But yea,

Luv you
shadowphoenix101
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
*pokes* ok who are you and what have you done with my Jellybean?
That was just wow and really really really angsty. I loved it.
Sorry it took me so long ^_^

Turkey xoxo
Lamanth
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
It’s like I said; you can find the words, you just have to put them into someone else’s mouth before you can say them. I guess you need to distance yourself from them in a way.

Will it sound perverse if I say this is good, very good even? Probably, but it is.

I think you got Julia’s thoughts bang on, especially where she’s wondering what she did to deserve Minmin’s friendship. But I think at the time Julia wasn’t thinking about Mimi or her parents or anything, in the end I don’t think she could think at all.

And I can so feel Mimi’s pain from this, the anger, the worry, the guilt that she couldn’t stop it. But I think at the end the worst was the feeling of being powerless, cus even though she cared more than anything there was nothing she could do. But then not only having to go through that with Julia, but knowing that Queen might do the same thing...

*huggles Mimi super tight*

Love you so much
Your Stormy
LiPhi
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
Ah you and your Angst Mha-chan :P

That was so good!
I loved the fight xD

:( silly Julia dying!
my friend
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
TT.TT *sniff* that was sad.
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