Oh i love this chapter!

I had forgotten about Harry's eyes. (see what i mean? LOL)

"Sometimes Hermione wondered if he could simply order his heart to beat in a certain rhythm. Knowing Severus, she wouldn't put that beyond him." :D
ehehehe

I some times hate you! LOL

You always give us so much to think about!

A shadow with a mind of it's own, that no one knows nothing about.
Fudge.
Astoria.
Voldybutt.
Necromancers.
Lois.
hm
Driving me crazy again!

Narcissa doesn't know about Draco?
And does she know about her grandson?

I suspect that very soon Hermione will have to start using a wand again.

Funny how they all feel guilty somehow, about Severus choices.
But at the time, no one did anything about it!

*sigh*
So often people want to help and they just end up hurting.
Lois just feels useless.

I am very interested to know how you are going to end this.

He can not be killed!

oh, i was hoping that Astoria might be a ghost...you know...for the little Dragon!

And why doesn't Harry want to go to the doctor?What does he know? hm

"Perhaps he … fudged a bit?" LOL Snape making humor!

I like the idea of the new wards...all of them!:)

And Severus shadow is watching over Hermione? What a strange concept...but why am i surprised?!eheheh

*grins*

Well let the games begin!

Again! LOL

ok, so i read "Apprentice" and immediately had to start on this...it's just so addicting! and i absolutely adore the way you write Severus. please please please update soon!

Not as good as the Apprentice, but interesting. I really hope Hermione gets back on her feet soon.

Beautiful, once again your story has not just taken my breath away but also my words. Please keep writting, if your care about my sanity you will continue to produce wonderful stories such as this( okay so maybe I won't go insane and loose all sanity, but this story truly is touching and beautiful). Keep them coming!

If I could even begin to tell you what I thought and how truly great this story is you might be here for days reading my review. As much as I would like to tell you all of the emotions and feelings this story brings me I have to sadly say I cannot. I hope my lose for words show you my true feelings, because sometimes words are not enough. Keep writting!

Hallo Juno, ich bin bis hierher gekommen und werde jetzt stur ausharren, bis es weitergeht. ;-)
Hoffentlich platze ich nicht vorher vor Spannung, das wäre ein wahrlich unschöner Anblick.

Denn ich gehe davon aus, dass Voldemort nach dem Zwischenfall mit dem Buch schon den sprichwörtlichen Fuß in der Türschwelle zur Welt der Lebenden hat.
Und dann noch Hermines Magieproblem, ..., entweder bringt es sie um, oder es wird sie stärker als zuvor werden lassen (ich hoffe natürlich auf Letzteres).

Die Szene im letzten Kapitel mit der schnurrenden Minerva fand ich sehr anrührend, nicht nur wegen der Assoziation zu 'Prisoners of Azkaban', die sie in mir auslöste, die Vorstellung, dass McGonagall wenigstens in Katzengestalt ein wenig Ruhe findet, hat etwas Tröstliches.

Hallo Juno,

ich bin von der Fortsetzung von 'The Aptrentice and the Necromancer' hellauf begeistert.
Eine Sequenz, die ich schon in dieser Story liebte ist Hermiones 'Mantra' >Vetyver, nutmeg, cypress, rosemary, bergamot … <, wenn sie an Snape denkt.
Und Deine Einfälle und Anspielungen auf literarische und filmische Klassiker sind einfach fantastisch.
Das 'Barrie syndrome' ließ mich breit grinsen, ebenso wie die 'Mary-Poppins-Academy', warum in Merlins Namen ist Rowling da nicht selber drauf gekommen?
Und nachdem jetzt auch noch Indiana Jones Erwähnung fand, darf ich vielleicht auch noch auf eine Erwähnung des berühmten Jack Sparrow hoffen. ;-)

Jetzt bin ich mal noch gespannt, wie es mit Fudge weitergeht. Klar, woher er das Gold hat, ... und ich schätze, er wird ein ähnlich unrühmliches Ende wie Umbridge nehmem (I hope so).

LG

Irm

Woo, finally a chance to catch up! I'm somehow suspecting that it was Voldie whom Alina heard talking to Barret...

And erm, did Minerva just die? :-|

It has been a long time since I was able to catch up on this story. I certainly missed a lot. You are doing wonders weaving danger and dread into the characters lives. The supposedly post-Voldemort time is not turning out as everyone expected. Severus, Harry, Alina and Minerva seem especially burdened. Hermione appears to be teetering on the edge of sanity. This new prophesy sounds like terrible times are coming very soon and all of our favorite people are mentioned.