Loved loved loved loved loved this.

Wonderful story and Nice Work!

Wow. Please remind me why it took me so long to find a story like this.

I just finished reading it...actually, I stayed up until 2 last night trying to finish the story, all ten chapters, because it was just really really good. It fit all the requirements of a story that I wanted: angst, drama, problems, some kind of solution, and screwed up in general. (I know that sounds harsh, but I believe that there's a lot that an author can explore by writing angst that you just can't find in humour. I mean...humour is good fun and obviously you need a talent to keep things light, but angst is definately a whole new level.)

All the characters, whether OC or non-OC where done perfectly. I mean, I can defiantely see why there's the whole screw-up, because of all the tangled relationships. And this is definately one of my new favourite stories because of all the messed up relationships, for a lack of better word. I know that it is cruel, but this portrays something more realistic. I am glad that despite Casey and Derek finally having a relationship, it’s not all ‘peachy and wonderful and we’re one big happy family with smiles plastered on our faces 24/7’, even if they try to ignore the fact that they’re not perfect. And in any case, they aren’t anyways. They have a lot of issues to go through, I think, even between Casey and Derek. They can all work out their problems, and hopefully by working on their priorities and how to take care of children (because face it, despite Casey being really nice and Derek totally listening to her, they still aren’t going to win any parent awards any time soon...even if it’s for their own daughter), they would’ve realized what went wrong.

And I know that most people focus it...well, on the children. That it’s the kid’s fault that ended up stoned and dead and rotting with no one caring about them because they made a bad choice. Well, I’m glad that James proved otherwise. These kind of situations are certainly happening because both parties are not doing their jobs right. I know that James should’ve tried, not just hide around in a corner and ignore everything around him, but given the circumstances, can you really blame the guy? I am glad that he put up with most of it...taking drugs but still going home. He’s not bad underneath all those issues, again, issues that parents have piled up on him WAY before his time.

Anyways, I think I’m rambling on and on now, but I just wanted to say that this story really gave me the chills and gave me a lot to think. Another reason why I loved this particular hurt/family story so much; you manage to present serious and provoking issues in such an entertaining yet simple manner that makes my emotions go crazy. I was crying by the end of it...because it’s just not fair. One guy’s life basically got “ruined” because of the last generations’ problems; he had to suffer it all? I dunno, it doesn’t sound like a fair trade if you ask me.

And, while I was thinking, would you ever write this from Sally’s POV? Or at least explore her character more in this universe. I think that she is least understood character (other than Casey, who manages to act so motherly and perfect every time that even I’m getting annoyed...no offence. But she’s not showing the stepmother jealousy, yet she somehow managed to make a kid lose himself through all their choices...) from both your universe and the show. I can see her just going to one of the AA meetings, talking about her past and how it led her to that whole lifestyle of drinking/partying herself away, if not hardening her facade to keep herself from being hurt. I can also see her...just breaking down and screaming how much she hates Derek, for pretty much ruining her. If not...a oneshot please? I would love to see more of her...(Unless you already have plans. Than that I can wait.)

I think I should stop talking (typing) now, since you’re probably already tired from reading my whole ‘speech’. So just good luck on any of your future projects, because I’d love to read them.

~Idiotic

So...I really liked this story, which surprised me a lot. I almost quit when i realized it was about the poor kid with divorced parents. Because honestly? A lot of my friends when I was younger were in similar situations to James, and they were generally just as screwed up, though not on drugs or anything. And they also tended to be whiny, selfish, aggressive, and just hard to get along with. They could be good friends, of course, but you had to put up with a lot from them all along. And I thought that was perfectly okay until I got into high school and met people with even more screwed up lives that didn't go through all the childish antics, and I realized that they ultimately had control over their lives and pulling the sort of junk they did just made it even worse for them.
But James...James I liked, for whatever reason. Maybe its because he's starting to take responsibility and isn't acting like a spoiled brat; I dunno. But I'm eager for the next story, now, and want to know what happens next!

That was absolutely amazing. I'm really hoping that James finds a relationship with Casey. (I love her too much.)

You kept all the non OC characters in character very well. I really loved, and it was a real representation on what happens to kids that are from a former marriage. (I thought it was funny that you didn't include Nora's pregnancy, because it could cause the neglect of Casey and Derek, just as they had done to James.)

I can't wait for the new story, but are you going to do it from a different point of view?

Wish you well.

Thank you for all the work you have done on this. I for one am happy that there well be more from you soon.

awesome story i loved it

I really enjoyed this storry and I'm glad you posted more.

is the story over? cuz i'm kinda confused. i really like it

Just stumbled upon your wonderful story and look forward to the next and final chapter! Peace.

oh my gosh. i love this! i NEED the last chapter!

Sorry for not reviewing :( But anyways, YAY! James came home ^^; I love it so far. Update :D

Sorrey, I have Not had time before. I Like it, so far thing look like there are going ok, so what happened? Thank You and keep it up.

I just found out you updated :) And I'm so happy haha. So James is actually Mike? x) I knew it. And aww, Mike's best friend died :( Update soon ^^

O My, that was jest soo Good! What happened at Thanksgiving?