HellfireSupremacy 2008-07-24 . chapter 1I see what you did there, superb delivery at the end. Your closing sentence juxtaposts beautifully with Seth's nervous mood throughout the story. There's an almost artistic quality to it. |
ylc 2008-07-24 . chapter 1So cute!! Very short, but really nice!! You truly writte quite beautifully! |
saffiremoon21 2008-06-30 . chapter 1initial reaction: THIS IS SO CUTE!
very nice, i loves it! |
Kitten Kisses 2008-06-30 . chapter 1Heehee, this was really cute, Kors! I wish I could leave a longer review, but my brain's rather dead at the moment. I love the handkerchief idea, though... That sounds just like something Eirika would do. Not to mention what she said... I could see her doing that also. Haha.
Wonderful job!
-Manna |
wolfraven80 2008-06-26 . chapter 1This is really lovely. I love how you added in so many little details (Seth’s armour, Ephraim and Innes arguing, etc.) in such a short space. It really brings this little vignette to life. And of course it’s always great to see new Seth/Eirika stuff around. Nicely done! |
Justified Wings 2008-06-24 . chapter 1You ought to know I'm quite in love with this and with your writing as a whole. Thank you for spending so much time with me and sharing your creativity. |
Maxmagnus20019 2008-06-24 . chapter 1...lol!
Just win baby! xD
Cute oneshot indeed. |
devandonet223 2008-06-24 . chapter 1Loved it. It's a shame there aren't many Sacred Stones fans out there. I think it's because Sacred Stones wasn't as popular as Rekka No Ken or RoR/RD. This fic is beautiful, you really described Seth. |