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Kami No Raijin 5/4/10 . chapter 3
lol they zombies nor spirits scarry resident evil shit!
newworld9 5/29/05 . chapter 1
Thank you for completing this fic. Too many people begin without ending. I think it doesn't matter how far or how long it takes before you get to the end, or how much that is written is passionate or forced-out, but what matters is that you got to the end.

If you continue to write, final fantasy or others, here's a little bit of advice: believe in the story. It will tell itself. :)

sincerely,

christabel
Divamercury 1/7/05 . chapter 27
This was AMAZING. Thanks so much for sharing!

DM
justphrases 12/7/04 . chapter 27
WOW! this was exptremely amazing. The only thing I was disappointed with was Jane rejecting Neil. I wanted a bit of a happier eniding it you know what I mean! It was well written and I only found one or two mistakes but I was too enraptured with reading it that I can't remember where they are! oops! lol ;p keep up the amazing writing!
ever2green 10/3/04 . chapter 2
Hi, okay. well first and for most...THIS REALLY GOOD! I know, I know. I haven't finished the whole thing yet but I know something good when I see one. Um, not exactly finished with this chapter but I'll get to it when I'm not so busy. I wish you'd make a sequel- unless there already is. Ciao!
Ovo 5/12/04 . chapter 27
*Reviews for the sake of doing so*
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... And I refuse to PDF this until you've got it down EXACTLY as you want it. *Nods*
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_ Congratulations on finishing it, though. Well done.
ntrophi 5/1/04 . chapter 27
Sequels make Kat gleeful D
I thought it ended fairly well. Now all we need is for Boyer to have his own story and everything will be wonderful D
*goes to be unhelpful elsewhere*
weylandyutani 5/1/04 . chapter 27
I liked it very much. Poor Neil! You deserve a break, while you think up a sequel, bwa-hahaha!
Excellent fic!
Arsthein 4/15/04 . chapter 26
Hi!
I'm a friend of Ro Chyo, but I had never entered fanfiction.net before, and I've arrived just in time to read chapters 1-26 of Out Of The Ashes without suffering the wait between chapters but... argh! I'm just in time to suffer the worst wait... the last chapter! Please! I beg you! post it soon! Take your time but don't give up, this is wonderful!
You can bet that square guys should take some notes from this story. I even say that I think there should be made a second film with this story as script. Exactly like you have written it.
It's great, perfect! I liked the film pretty much, and the only point I didn't like very much was the way it ended and the terrible fate of so nice characters that had so potential (just how you've showed to us all). But here is the way the story should continue. Congratulations because I love it and in my mind this is official.
I could write lines and lines telling you why I like this fiction so much, and if you want I would do it, but I don't want to bore you with so much talking here in a simple review. My english is not quite good anyway, oh! I didn't say it: I'm from Spain.
I usually dislike mixes between sci-fi stories and magic fantasy, but this mix is so good that it had me hooked from the beginning.
The merit is all yours, of course, and the way you've taken the tale, because in the end, I realized that the more of things about the world and characters of final fantasy that I've liked the most have come from your pen. And your style of writing is very very good! Don't worry anymore for action scenes: they are god...
I use to be very difficult to satisfy, but I can't give less than a flawless victory to this story. Outstanding.
Thank you very much for this so wonderful way I'm now able to store this tale in my heart. And whether the first part is not yours, the most of the final version of the whole thing in my mind is yours! :)
(Oh, again, excuse my mistakes, I told you my English is not all right.)
Ovo 11/17/03 . chapter 26
Bleh. At least your summons don't seem as overbearing as the typical Final Fantasy summons have become.

I'm more interested in this... Lieutenant Kain. *Smirks*

Oh, just to let you know - reformating this story is a total pain. A Total Pain!
ntrophi 11/14/03 . chapter 26
*gasp*

I want TSI to be this good. I also don't want this to end. Curse you and your finishyness!

*shakes fist in semi comedic manner*

Seriously. Nice one D
Quvil 10/28/03 . chapter 25
cliff hanger! Update soon!
weylandyutani 10/17/03 . chapter 1
Whew. Thought you had vanished for awhile there! Love the twists and turns that this story has taken, and I am certain that there's a great concolusion in the wings.

Yes, more please!
Ovo 10/17/03 . chapter 25
...

This has me worried, though I wonder if I should be.

Eh. Guess I'll have to wait to find out.
ntrophi 10/16/03 . chapter 25
Go, Jane!

*a little too tired to be more constructive* ;
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