-You do know that, considering the Marauder's Map, that Padfoot may know something about the coven . . . just a thought!

You still writing this? It may be a bit ecchi, but it does have a decent story line. Please continue!

Happy writing, and update soon!

If this story is not complete you MUST update it soon!

Well, much further along than the last time I read this...

I like how you've got Hermione flirting with Harry already. They should had gotten together now! Will there be the whole Cho mess this time?

One question though, prompted by a comment in chap 2 IIRC: Susan Bones. Her aunt told Hermione that Susan's also lusting for/in love with Harry. Any chance that that this could maybe have a threeway H/Hr/Sus relationship? It's just that all the other 3-ways (mostly) are Harry/Hermione/Luna (or Ginny, or... *shudder*Draco) When others have paired Susan with Harry, Hermione's been dumped on Ron, Draco or dead (all of which puts me off) Some Hufflepuff Loyalty is what Harry really needs (along with Hermione's brains, but thats a given), not Ron's pettyness, and with Susan he'd have the ear of the Head of the DMLE... ;)

Whatever you decide to do, ignore the above, make a third version or alter the ship slightly, please continue with the story.

I hope you get a chance to come back to this story, 'cause I like where it's going. I can honestly say that I cannot think of another story that got away with calling Hermione Granger 'Hooters'.

This is interesting and funny, please update, I am loving this story.

Keep Writing

Princess Ducky

For starters, please allow me to take the time to gush a bit about how much I like your writing. It gives me no amount of amusement and, I'll have to admit, some of your ideas are among the most erotic I've ever come across. Or at least they way you write them makes them so.

I'm also very impressed with the knowledge you convey.

There's just one thing... like most other people, you have a completely skewed perception of bra sizes ;). A woman wearing a -> fitting <- bra with a cup size of D has at best a moderate chest compared to her frame. A cute handful but certainly nothing impressive as this chapter suggests.

Don't worry, I don't blame you. Even 90 percent of the women out there wear completely wrong sizes. If you're interested I'll gladly explain some of the mechanics, but I don't want to bore you with it.


I'd just like to say how much I'd enjoy more of your writing *hint, hint*.

great story keep up the good work update soon

Nice start on this one as well. You've planted lots of interesting little plot threads here. Will be interesting to see where you take this.

More plx

Update soon please.
I can't wait to see people's reactions to Hermione and Harry's play flirting...

So very well done!

this is good but no offence i like the old one better

*laughs*

I totally loved it.

I've seen it before, but I've never read it, because I thought it would be all smut.

So I played it safer, and decided to read the Harmony version, and I'm definitely glad I did.

It was fun, and entertaining, and the competition between Hermione and Cho is awesome.

I absolutely love the coven. :) Makes me wonder if there is a male counterpart...

When Dolores Umbridge banished Harry Potter from her class, Hermione Granger’s mind went blank.
What now?
In danger of complete shutdown, her conscious mind pulled the "In Case of Emergency" alarm and summoned her seldom relied upon subconscious. Her subconscious mind showed up with an armful of CDs, assessed the situation, and slapped a classic from The Clash into the player (it often had to resort to extreme measures to gain attention).
The searing guitar launched into the iconic hook that resonated inside Hermione’s head. The chords jumpstarted her brain like a heart revived by electronic defibrillator. It wasn’t the answer to her problems, but it was the right question.
"Should I stay, or should I go?"
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*snickers*

Love her subconscious.

Great work on this story so far, definetly interesting idea. Curious to see how you play this out vs canon and time wise (ie pace I mean). I'd missed the last bit of Helene's thoughts in my first reading that she is dgse, ugh. Motives. oh well. Cheers, can't wait for more of this!