I must agree with jelibeanne: "I love the fact that the "whole gang" went out to eat, it gives them all a sense of normalcy in a not-so-normal world."

That was fun. I do love how Hellboy doesn't actually read his fortune out loud, and no one says anything about it. XD Keep up the great work.

I dislike fortune cookies.My fourtune is *allways* relevant...It's scary.

haha. that was cute =].

Haha. I liked this one.

Interesting.

Hahaha! i like HB's responses and "readings." ;) and someone has been eating chinese lately. (now im hungry..)
anyway, my fave is Liz's. i dont know how to explain it but, its very good. its very...poignant? straight-forward but subtle at the same time, and truth. very good indeed. :]

The flow is a little choppy, but it's good overall. Man, those Fortune Cookies must be rigged or something...

nice! though those fortunes for hellboy were almost creepy...

You, my dear, had ENTIRELY too much fun with this story! And how fun to boot! I love the fact that the "whole gang" went out to eat, it gives them all a sense of normalcy in a not-so-normal world.

I also am intrigued by tense; present tense is so tricky to do and yet you execute it flawlessly. Of course, the brevity of the story might have something to do with how well the tense is written... Naw, your writing always seems so effortless.

Thank you for sharing this little gem. Fun read, interesting tense, darling little scenario! I keep reading it and rereading it. Too, too cute.