Love this story! thanks for writing!

Wow! that was intense and very riveting.

I just read this story in one sitting, and all I can say is WOW!
And now a CLIFFHANGER? You are evil! What a tragedy!
Poor Sarah! Jareth is wicked, really, really wicked!
She can not trust him and she can not not try to help him either ! That´s cruel.

Okay, first things first. DAMN. That was hot. xD I really hope you continue this!

I fully intend to add my name to those who have "wondered, pleaded, and begged" for you to continue this. Just so you know.

Also, I feel that Jareth deserves a little slack. If he's managed to prove that he DOES have power over her (thus, dare I hope, gaining back his proper power) AND distract them both with lots of yumminess at the same time...doesn't he deserve some mercy? (And maybe a second round? Or at least a chance to explain himself?)

...*tries to look innocent* *fails completely*

I LOVE YOU!

That was, without a doubt, the hottest sex scene I think I have ever read. I think it's because of the noises you have Jareth make. Usually he's so much in control, a master of sex, and here he's so incredibly affected by everything, to the point that he's vulnerable. Very, very hot!

Wow, I love how amazingly complex you make Jareth and Sarah, usually it's pretty easy to tell when you're dealing with Jareth-the-bad-guy and Jareth-the-good-guy, but you make him so ambiguous! It's so refreshing, not to mention a strong and knowledgeable Sarah, and excellent smut scenes thrown into the mix! I can't wait for the next chapter!


All the Best,
Grapefruit.ninja

SWEET! I love it! Magic doors to who knows where, *sigh* the stuff dreams are made of. Please update soon. *snicker* I really want my own tiny shirtless Jareth.*sigh* How did Sarah find those very special keys? And why would she have 'wards' up? Who did she have to gaurd herself from? And last but not least... why did they wait so long to go through one of the 'doors'? OH?! Wait, we had to have the oh so lovely sexy sceen. They could'nt go through before that could they? Where will they get followed to next?

Loved it!

*quibble*
Oh mah gah...

love to if they can get away from thing that is comeing for them

wow have to say damn bloody good stroy hun

::peeks head out of closet:: I...yeah, you know, most of the time I know exactly what to say after chapters like this one. But I think every synapses responsible for essential motor functions like speech and cognizant thought just shorted out and melted...and I'm pretty sure my monitor caught on fire...

Because holy smokes that was HOT!

And then, at then end, you dunked me quite successfully into an icy bucket of suspicion, taking away every thrill I had received in the previous paragraphs, making a cold knot of apprehension clutch at my guts.

Now THAT is good writing!

Until next time ::returns to closet::

I've read this chapter over twenty times now (which, given the content, makes me *quite* the dirty little pervert), and it blows me away every time.

I love your smut; it is always so delicious, yet so *desperate* and no other writer in this fandom (or any other that I've frolicked around in) can portray that balance. You get the sense that Sarah and Jareth are in more danger from the intimacy of the act than from the beastie on the other side of the door and that really is a lovely thing to read.

I adored the fact that imminent death spurred them on to shag like teenage bunnies on Viagra rather than simply escape. I love the fact that in the midst of it all, Sarah has the presence of mind to notice Jareth's "lovely pants" (because they really are lovely). I did wonder whether Jareth managed to get some clothes on before Sarah opened the magic door, though I prefer to imagine him standing naked and glittery in the middle of the lounge room.

Given that I doubted Jareth throughout this tale (especially after that "knife and box" comment earlier), I've decided to believe that he didn't just ruthlessly shag Sarah for his own dastardly purposes, despite the fact that he sucks at post-coital conversation (waves "Team Jareth" banner).

To sum up: this chapter is rich in awesome. I bow to you, oh smut Queen...

AH! What happened?? It just ended... Okay, I know you haven't gotten more written or posted but please continue it. I absolutely loved what you've gotten done so far. Please continue to work on the story.