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| Biancaneve 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseHahahahahahahahahaha. Penelope totally softens the blow of having to go back to uni. I love this, because it's like your normal abstract-descriptive what-am-I-puzzle style in Dooh Nibor, just dialled up about two thousand percent! I especially love the chips - "Crunching bricks of yellow, swimming through thick bubbles as I press my nose against the glass, watching them being shoveled into rustling houses." Also, you are my hero for coining the phrase "unforgiveable denim-eating forces in the detergent". Now I know where my jacket went. It's hilarious reading about the gang's antics through Pen's POV - LOL at Allan scottish-dancing, and "Scarlett Junior" and "Scarlett Senior" made me giggle. Serious aww at Much with the lighter. I do hope Pen gets a grip on herself at some point so they can move past this princess-servant dynamic, because the lad is awesome and deserves better. Good luck with the plot-untangling! |
| whatsthefracas 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abusegeez, how did i not read this before now? okay, well, in truth i've read like nothing on this site in ages. "you'd think you would have learned by now!" (said in robin's voice from the penultimate episode of series 1) i end up missing things like this. things which are so...i don't even have a word for it. so absolutely what i need right now. so EXACTLY what i think sometimes. so quotable, that i'd basically just copy and paste the entire thing in my review. i've been meaning to thank you for the shoutout on your profile, and now i get to thank you for this! it's made my night :) |
| Vulpes Lapis 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseMethinks Penelope has done one too many recreational drugs--she really IS like a toddler. She's ridiculous. She's quite mad. And I love her for it. Really. |