Nice little scene, though I was a little confused you went with the name 'Torren.' Seemed like you were going with the name 'Tagan,' though I have been reading your stories here from the bottom up, so maybe you just decided to switch over at some point?

So heartbreaking! I think this is dead-on for The Seed. John and Torren are so cute together. And the description of John at the end is incredible. You really captured his emotions.

Oh wow! That was powerful and so bittersweet! I love how you wrote Carson!

I loved the opening in which you describe John holding the baby - it was such a beautiful scene; I could picture it to perfection. Oh, but themn this perfect picture was riven with angst! WHAT A CONTRAST!!

*sques*

I LOVE IT! Ruby, you kill me with the non-angst - but the fluffy fluff was just what I needed!

I love it:D

geez... i'm just... lost...
this is very touching. you've got me

That was brilliant. I'm a little confused, though... isn't Teyla's Papa called Tagan? Did you just base Torren on that?

Truthfully, I like Torren better. We should suggest that to TPTB. I'll just call JM and PM and let them know we've decided on a better name. I don't think they'll take my call, but I could give it a whirl if you like. :D

Well done, mate. ;)

Aw, jeez!! Carson... the baby... John... Teyla... just, aw jeez.

Oh this is so sweet! I can't wait for season 5...I'm SO GLAD we succeeded in getting Carson back!! WOO HOO!

Wonderfuly written Ruby. Thanks. :D

Fabulous dude...yet again...I swear its a true talent to get every sentence just as it should be and it all flows so easily...Bravo...

I say you write angst very well. :D Me loves Carson so I'm a happy chick! :D

And...it's actually finished! That's two stories that are completed! What is happening? You don't want to lose your WIP Queen status, do you? ;)

Nice! You write a good Carson by the way.

Esp liked the 'Bless his heart' line - I have thought that myself in regards to John.