It was very excellent, and basically makes sense. Are you going to make more chapters? Please do...

you sucked.

I didn't think it sucked. I thought it was fairly good!

It's FANTASTIC! Not suck at all! i just wonders why it seems to ended so abruptly... (just like the last one, "Restoration of Evil" )

But overall, it's great. I really like your writing style

I LOVE THIS! ESPECIALLY THE THING AT THE END WHERE U FIND OUT IT'S JUST MEMORIES! BEAUTIFUL! BRILLIANT! i thought i'd look at the end of the angst section instead of the beginning, to bring some poor lost soul/story out of the depths of being forgotten. or maybe it's just me that tends to read them in order. i don't think so though. a couple of days ago, i updated/posted all of my stories. actually, if u look at the updates, i cheated to get my stories back closer to the beginning of the list. it didn't work though. within a couple of hours, i was past number 20 on all of them. now i'm coming up to number 50. this is not good. maybe u could R&R my stories? it would save me from the depths of being forgotten!

I like it_ That was good_

ARG! Its just YUGI!

This is soooooooo good!Ya hafta make a chapter 2!

And I won't take no for an answer!My yami is just as violent as evil Bakura is!N e ways, great ficcy

-Animegrl _

It was good, but isn't Yami supposed to BE THE PHAROH!

Ooooh, me like! _

Waaai! So kyoot ! I luv how u wrote it! Really good! You should continue! Yesss yesss _

I liked the general plot, even if it was AU. (Which isn't a bad thing, just didn't expect it to be) Only... I'm confused... I mean, maybe I'm just not thinking right tonight but, why would the Pharaoh attack Yami like that? From what was written, it doesn't really seem like there was a reason to...

Anyway, overall it was a good story, slighlty rushed and confusing, but I guess I can't complain much since I know I've done it before.

That was really good. Keep it up.

Meh, I thought it was cool. *shrugs* Don't know why you think it sucks, it was very good.

Hmm, not bad. But wasn't Yami Yuugi supposed to be the pharaoh? And didn't he sacrifice himself to stop the monsters from taking other the world? I might do a fic like this.