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Hayashi Nariiko
2009-01-15 . chapter 1
This is actually quite sad. D:
[And very nicely written.]
Sanae was never the type to seem as if he'd really stand up for what HE wanted...
Sad, losing Joshua like that. D:
Kiesha
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
I like. I like alot. The idea of Neku as conductor never even crossed my mind. In my mind, Joshua always quits being the Composer. (Don't ask how that works. I donno.)
Ruemaja
2008-06-29 . chapter 1
I really love how your words flow smoothly when you write. ^_^ I know, I keep saying it, but I really love your writing. ^_^
whoppers-maltesers
2008-06-26 . chapter 1
I keep falling in love with your short stories. Every time I check my mail I hope to see something knew from you.

Hm... about your story... For one, I liked how it was a bit centered around Hanekoma. The guy needs more love.

Also, the Neku!Conductor thing was a pretty neat idea. I have to admit that it'd never crossed my mind, though I can see it happening.
Good job on this.

One thing of advice: Since there are people who haven't gotten all the secret reports/finished the game, maybe you could add a small warning/heads up in the summary?
maliciousmarquee
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
squee! This is so cute! >o< *bricked coz of obvious Hanekoma/joshua fangirly-ness* I'd love to read a bit more of your work!
Luciana Costa
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
Heehee~ Very good! I loved it!
Somehow your writing style reminds me of mine, maybe some of yours rubbed off on me. When I read too much of one author I start writing like him/her. You should have seen me in my sci-fi book phase.
Anyway, for the review, this was a great story, I think that you could've put a little something about Hanekoma at the end, like maybe him saying that he couldn't resist Joshua either or something like that. But hey, that's just me, maybe I'm not the best one to take writing advice from.
I like the introspective style, and the kind of implied one-sided Hanekoma/Joshua and the implied Joshua/Neku. Implied is always good. You even worked a little bit of Joshua-y dialogue in there, which was win.
Once again, another great story from you! Keep up the good work!
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