 The Mrs.Black 2009-04-04 . chapter 1aww thank you for lovely cute moment!
im kinda hoping for another chapter...lol |
 CyberForte 2008-12-29 . chapter 1Hm... Very well done. Perhaps I'm interpretting incorrectly, but, if it was meant to be a pairing fic, I think I might understand the use of stategy. Just wild mass guessing, of course, but, assuming he knew of her feelings, it'd be easy to purposefully leave it there to make her think just what she did... That would be a rather good stategy, after all. Of course, that's presuming a lot more romanticism that is shown on his part, so... I'm probably just being romantic. Did you have an intended interpretation?
-CF |
 Alexius-CA 2008-09-02 . chapter 1A very interesting one-shot there, Kiri. Very concise, very in-character, and a very well-orchestrated snapshot into the Geass world, as well as a juxtaposition of the hidden identity of Lelouch as Zero to his school life at Ashford. Kudos to the good job. |
 Rabid Weasel 2008-08-14 . chapter 1Very nice. You definitely kept Shirley in character, with her crush on Lelouch well written. I don't think Lelouch would have said strategy, he might have tried deflecting the question or just saying that it wasn't important.
By the way: was Lelouch writing his terrorist strategies in romanji? |
 Theos Amneos 2008-06-26 . chapter 1Oh wow, so you write for ShirleyxLelouch too. :O This is one of my favourite pairings, so while I suppose I can understand if you want to limit the scope of your other fic I do hope you continue with what you've set up here. |
 icarus923 2008-06-24 . chapter 1It's nice. I wonder when he'll use that thing for. |
 CherriDeulle 2008-06-24 . chapter 1YAY!>< I LOVE SHIRLEY AND LELOUCH! i'm unbelievably happy to find a shirley and lelouch one and the way you wrote it accented how much she likes lelouch so 5/5!!^^ |