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Reviews for: Man’s Laughter, Woman’s Tears
LosingInTranslation
2008-06-30 . chapter 1
Very nicely done. The words worked out very well, and the imagery was fantastic.


PS-And I think your Dad and mine might be the source of that punny bone we share. ;)
RavennaNightwind
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
wow. That was really short, but really great. I loved it. I like how you used what we know to write a glimpse into her past. Great job.
chloeeleanor
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
Very powerful! I like it!
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