So much emotion!

Absolutely heartbreaking. ;-;
When Sakura said "It should have been you. It should have been me!", it just- ;A;
And then Sasuke said "Not you. Never you" Omg I can't describe my feels ;u;

im a very flexible narusaku fan and one thing i hate is when sasusaku fans bash naruto. i like your story because at least it give naruto some justice. you sir deserve a cookie

It is happy in a way. They still have each other. Sad that Naruto's death did it, but there's that glimmer of hope in this story.

that was so sad TT

and by sad

I mean wonderful

in a non-sick-masochistic-omfg-you-write-really-well kind of way

Like it though it is sad

I really liked this story.

that was beautiful. like, how it was denial and, like, more denial and self-inflicted pain and how they have a kind of potentially happy ending anyways. there is one thing, though:

and lets the damn within him break

should be "dam"

i am like crying... that was so good but so sad. i liked the ending

Aww! :'(

God that was painful. In the most wonderfully written way. I hate it and I hope it never happens. But I love it and the justice. Because the black haired devil carrying the sun blond angel is perfect. It should have been you, it should have been me, is too true.

Well done. For you to bring back the pain of loosing loved ones through writing like this is impressive.

...

D:

that was heartbreaking, in the best way possible.

mad props. had me tearin up.

Beautifully tragic. I need some fluff now, stat!

oh goodness, this is sad sad and beautiful and i jsut want to cry. good job on making such a heartbreaking thing so sweet.

(gasps, flounders wildly) You...YOU KILLED NARUTO!

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But in a completely tragic, beautiful, heartbreaking way that I commend wholeheartedly. SasuSaku FTW. Well done!