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Chirichi916
2009-11-14 . chapter 31
I'm torn by this chapter... I LOVED the date... but... Duo "might run and hide but he never tells a lie"
but he lied
flat out...

Also, I appreciate the lack of Relena-bashing. Too often the poor girls some two-dimensional queen-of-bitchy-ness, and yeah okay, she was a crazy stalker in the anime, but she wasn't EVIL?
It's really nice to see her portrayed as something more true to character, naive yes, spoiled yes, but she was also strong willed and really pretty brave considering how sheltered her upbringing had been.
Very refreshing.
Hellcat81
2009-11-09 . chapter 50
sweet ending. though i can imagine duo would be paranoid about photographers. :D loved the tay pov. he'd be a good match for hilde.
Hellcat81
2009-11-09 . chapter 49
i just remembered that there was a typo in dekim barton's name some chapters ago. :S

i am pleased how heero handled himself regarding duo's secrets and his involvement in the raids.

and i vote for maxwell-yuy! sounds better. btw, i didn't get howards name right away either. i guess you do need to have somewhat of a duo dirty mind to come up with such a relation. x.x
Hellcat81
2009-11-09 . chapter 47
so relena finds wufei attractive? :)

just one note, relena says to wufei that THEY are BACK on earth. this answer is a bit misleading as relena couldn't possibly know that wufei had been in space. i would omit the word 'back' as it implies things relena couldn't possibly know.
Hellcat81
2009-11-09 . chapter 46
god, i feel bad for heero. i think i feel more concerned for his position than for any of the others cuz i seriously think he is not stupid and he must be worried to be right about his suspicions most of the time. :( all the others already made their choices but heero still has to make it but at what cost...
Hellcat81
2009-11-09 . chapter 45
what's the name of duo's ship? did it already come up?

btw, the passage in which duo explains to howard why he took the risk of kidnapping relena sounds a bit too much like information solely for the reader. i understood howard to be involved in duo's plans since the beginning, so it comes across as strange that duo explains this kind of reasoning. sure, it's necessary for the reader but it still struck me as artificial.

i hope you show how duo brings back wufei and relena. and by god i hope he doesn't get caught. :S
Hellcat81
2009-11-09 . chapter 43
yeah, lena! don't forget! i also do hope so. :S i mean if lena doesn't do sth. the guardians can't ever stop from operating illegally. and wufei can only go missing for so long. btw, i wish i could see a picture of lena's self-made hairstyle.

oh, btw, you said only 50 people are living on l2? in your fic, i perceive l2 as a single colony instead of a cluster of colonies. that's why i am a bit surprised that there are only 50 people (even if a lot already died). but i always thought that the colonies were build to relieve earth, so 50 is sth. what i'd call a drop of water on a hot stone. (colony population vs. earth population) but that's just my impression. anyway, i am excited to read what lena will do next.
Hellcat81
2009-11-09 . chapter 39
hey there. have started reading this fic originally quite some time ago. but now that it's finished i can read it in one go. :D

my first comment has to go to tay. i really like this chara. the last scene with him and heero really made me laugh. i'm kinda disturbed though that he had to undergo surgery to look like duo. :S though i think it was already mentioned in the earlier chapters. anyway, i'm really curious how duo will save his ** this time.
AnimeSiren
2009-10-02 . chapter 50
Great story! It was a wonderful ride!
brave_chicken
2009-08-29 . chapter 50
I loved it! This was all I could think about for 2 days straight.
CircleKV12
2009-08-26 . chapter 50
Another great story completed. I love reading you stories. They are always good. Everything is explained, the plot is good, the idea is good, the romance is good, and most importantly the sex scenes are great. I look forward to reading your next story. Even though I might have to wait until after this semester, stupid college getting in the way of reading fanfiction. Keep the great stories coming!
mannd1068
2009-08-15 . chapter 50
Excellent story!
shadowcat0070
2009-08-14 . chapter 50
I finally get to review! I apologize for not reviewing every chapter but I have been reading =)I absolutely loved this story and it makes me sad that it's over already xD
roninlvr
2009-08-03 . chapter 50
As always, I enjoy the stories that you write. I loved this story very much and I am sorry that I wasn't able to respond to every chapter.

I am glad that you added in this final chapter letting us know what happened with the others. I was very glad to see that Heero did figure out what was going on and why they did it. I am glad to see that he was able to tell Duo that he knew and that it didn't change how he felt. I also loved the reasoning he gave. ^_^ You can't tell what you don't know!!

I look forward to future works!!
kayura sanada
2009-07-30 . chapter 3
Ah, and now that my internet's working, I can once again read this story. Yee-haw! ^_^

There is one small thing I feel I need to say about this (constructive criticism): Heero wouldn't have taught Relena to step on the toes on her enemy's shoes. In self-defense, if one wants to attack a person's foot, one should aim for the instep.

Other than that and a couple minor typing-fast problems, this story is freaking perfect! I can tell you're a settings-lover, since you spend a lot of time explaining the looks of things, but though it's sometimes overwhelming, I don't feel like you're giving me useless information.

In all, I love this story! ^_^
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