Aww, it's over. lol. I'm gonna go 3 sleep. it's 12:03 and I wanna dream about Itachi again tonight XD

I like this chapter, It's strange how they were all "I hate you" "I hate you more". Now they're like "I love you" "I love you more". Lol. Great chapter

I have a feeling your second OC is gonna be in the story soon.

Nice chapter. I actually didn't find a thing wrong with this one. And "Leader-bitch" Made me laugh. Hidan is funny.

Wow this story really is taking forever, eh? Lol. Great story. You're good at this.

OK, here's what really pissed me off. At the beginning of the chapter, you gave absolutely NO detail to the sex. I'd LOVE to hear about Kakuzu taking Hidan's virginity. It'd be the best part of the story (That I know of). Other than that, be more detailed with EVERYTHING. Especially lemon scenes. ESECIALLY. And good overall chapter.

Hidan should have been able to see way early in this chapter. Unless he stabbed his own eyes out, it's impossible for his sight to be gone for over 24 hours from such a slight injury. But besides that fact, nice chapter.

Interesting. I'm glad this one has more than one chapter, seeing as though most KakuHida lemons are only one, short one. Great chapter.

This was an awesome story, and I'm glad I read it. You really did good!

You didn't seriously mean this as a fic?

Ha, Hidan is kind-of pussy-whiped (or thread-whiped, whatever)
And yes Asshat is tip of all insults.
Yeah, havn't talked to you in forever, Lexi says hi (if you even remember her)
Still need to meet up at comicon eventually.
Back to the story, Kakuzu be a wee' bit out of character, but it's an RP so I'll live. Onto chapter 4, eventually...

Holy shit, Here I was reading an awesome fanfiction and it's you! The little mutant-demon-bunny that infected me of yaoi in the first place! I keep running into you in cyberspace ( If you can't tell its Taylor from like, 5 years ago, JTHM, remember?)

It's pretty awesome so far, but only on chapter 1.

I loved it.

Lol Hidan being overdramatic as he always is.
Kakuzu being a cold one but warming up.

Zombie brothers/ zombie lovers! :D I love this pairing. Cute ending. :D

So beautiful*sniffle* I can't beleive it okay? Why would u end up ripping dem apart? But u should totally write a sequel of them in hell or in heaven with the other dead akatsuki members more sasodei, kisaita and zettobi k? That would be totally awesome kakuhida are ma fav

awsome but you should have put more of a pullthenrelease thing at the end. Like draw the reader in more then let them go with something solid,but other than that great job