Reviews for A maybe Numb3rs story

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mae-E 2008-08-23 ch 3,	abusefrom the little you have here the idea is pretty sound! I like how you have the charaters interacting. So is there going to be a part when they ever learn the truth about eddie's/(harry's) past? I really liked how in your last line in the first chapter you had megan say that he totally creeped her out. and sonsidering megan suposed to be a profiler with a physclogy background for her to be that creeped out is really saying alot! So how will things progress as eddie's/harry's two worlds start to collide together? are the kidnapper's from the magical or non-magical world? if and when his new friends learn the truth about his past how will that change the way they see him, and becuse of that the way they treat him? has no one ever asked about his scar? or is he useing magic to hide it? I think that you should gather your toughts and try to give this story a real go, because what you have so far is really enjoyable. you just have to get it all in the right order though. I think your dead on with the charaters so far. from both worlds. and after all that happened to eddie'harry in his past I would think he would have learned to control his emotions very well. I like how you said that growing up around a certain attude or mind set you reconise it quickly when you come across it. you should really continue this.
Morgan Daratrazanoff 2008-08-22 ch 3,	abuseGreat!! Update soon!!
riegert8 2008-08-18 ch 1,	abuseI think that this an Interesting story, but I saw this harry potter vs. numb3rs as a bad sign. It almost saying that Numb3ers is Harry's enemy
MarbleGlove 2008-08-11 ch 3,	abuseAwesome. I've never seen this particular crossover but you've really combined them well. I hope you continue. Who took Helene? Did they know she was Hermione? Have they both lost their magic or are they avoiding it to be avoid being tracked by its use?
Deaths pet fox 2008-08-07 ch 3,	abuseSo far, what I'm seeing is the potential of a great story, but I have a few questions: 1.) At what point in the Num3ers series does it start after, as in episode? 2.) Is there a specific pairing you have in mind for Harry? 3.) What is 'Edwards' relationship with 'Helene'? Are they friends, friends with benefits or something that can't be revealed yet? Beyond that, lot's of potential. Dpf
Wonderbee31 2008-07-22 ch 3,	abuseNice part here, and looking forward to what all will be going down next with Harry and company.
diavoloduchessa 2008-07-14 ch 2,	abuseI like the concept of this story a lot. Are you going to continue it?
Sweet-single 2008-07-09 ch 2,	abusecool fic update soon!^^
BOOMrobotdog 2008-07-07 ch 2,	abuseI agree. I like this a lot. I do rather like the idea of Genius!Harry, just cause he is so often overlooked in favor of Hermione. And the whole Harry at the FBI, and dangerous!Harry thing is appealing to me, just be careful that it isn't overly dramatic or turn into some sort of Mary Sue/Gary Stu. I mean, yes, he's awesome, but since he's such a private person, AND also under a new identity, he won't be wanting to attract too much attention to himself. But I am confused about how he doesn't know about elementary level things if he is going to Cal Sci.. I understand that he wouldn't have time to pick up everything, but to get to that advanced of a level, I think he would have picked up a lot of little things that he hadn't known before. And, if he is really as smart as all that, I think he would have studied at the local library during his summers.
xwolfpupx 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuseOh, I like what you've got so far. I really hope you decide to continue this, because I haven't seen a believable Numb3rs/HP crossover yet (if there's even one out there). I mean, come on, math and magic?! Can't wait to see what's next, cause I think this might actually work out! XD
Luc 2008-07-05 ch 2, anon.	abuseIs Eddie same as Edwards? I don't watch numbers so this second chapter tilted a bit. Especially when there was suddenly no talk about Hermione. What is Cal Sci? I assume it's americanism and a school somewhere. I think this could be interesting if you decide to write it out. But please use capital 'I's in your author notes. It's bugging me silly. It would be nice if the whole episode story revolves around Harry instead of Hermione. Since she's been kidnapped. And around the fact that Harry's magic stays secret. Maybe the numbers guy, whose name I can't recal, decides at the end that there was something but it's better left a mystery. or something.
Mikazuki Hime 2008-07-03 ch 2,	abuseOh, very nice. I think you might actually be able to pull this off! I'm looking forward to it.
jonsmom14 2008-06-28 ch 2,	abuseI'm no scientist, so it sounded good to me. I really enjoyed Charlie's opinion of Harry. It was nice to see him compared in such a way that I understood Charlie's attachment and fascination with him. I'm definately anxious to read more. I'm still pulling for Harry to have kept his magic.
methoslover 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseVery intriguing snippet. Post the next chapter soon. :-)
Tayla 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseThis is a fascinating start. And did you think of working Colby into the story, because, you know, Colby Granger - Hermione Granger. Could add some interesting twists to the story if they are related.

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