I love the ability you have to write simple lines that just grab your heartstrings and give'em a good yank.

"Play Dead" was one of those for me from this one.

You know, screw conventions.

For all of my silly declarations about how the yuri horde is so horrifying, I think that you put them in an interesting enough perspective.

As for this story, Eva's morbid past is always a fascinating thing to observe. Even if the people's ignorance spells their own doom, the horrifying weight of her past evils still hang in the air.

And as for you, I think you can finally go on my favorites list.

That was entirely different from Eggbelly but just as well-written. It was strangely beautiful, I think and does a good job setting the stage for what we know of Evangeline.

I, too, find Evangeline a most fascinating character. I truly enjoyed reading your take on her life and all the events that led up to what made her who she was. Very dark, very morbid - I think the part with the toymaker was the best part - and overall very, very interesting. I love your turn of phrases, like when you mention child's blood is too sweet to her bitter palette.

*Shiver*

Other than some sentences that are a bit too heavy, very well done.

QOTRS~*~

I have to agree, Evangeline is a pretty interesting character, I was always wondering how she turned into a vampire, and this was an awesome story !

Hey, nice work there Cloverfield! Good interpretation of Evangeline's past. Really dark, bitter and bloody and it's certainly a plausible possibility. Her observation of the multiple deaths was an interesting view of what happened in different time period. Eva's own thoughts mixed with her environment was an interesting approach. What happened to Eva's previous master was slightly vague (had the idea that he was killed but is it without any consequence?). And why in the end she wasn't burned by the sun? Because she consumed mages' blood? Maybe I missed something. Anyhoo, this one's an interesting story. Keep on writing (while waiting for the next part of Egg Belly) :)

When I first clicked on your story, I was a little doubtful when it mentioned song titles. I thought it might be one of those fics that are half made of song lyrics, but I noticed that you also write Egg Belly. I decided to give it a read, and I'm glad I read it. Another well written fic. Great job!

SQUE! I loved it! That was awesome! Very deep, I loved the bit with the toy-maker, it was so sad. Poor little Eva. I like the way you ended it too, and the way she first sees the sun again. That was just wonderful. SQUE!

Friggin' Awesome! Your vocabulary and scene presentations are superb!

Evangeline is one of my favourite characters, so I was pretty ecstatic when I saw that one of my favourite authors had written a fic on her. I have not been disappointed either. Well-written and very interesting. Nice work.