 team-jacob-4-ever126 8/28/10 . chapter 1great story! |
 alicecullenisawesome 7/25/10 . chapter 1 that was really funny lol lol lol |
 XohopelessromanticXo3 10/30/09 . chapter 1Aw i loved the end |
 ThatObsessiveFan 8/3/09 . chapter 1lol plz update asap |
 gayhogwartsandnudeerections 3/25/09 . chapter 1LOL...wait is this a one-shot? fghjklkfdjgfdj;;klj I NED TOO KNOW! FDLKFKLFDKLJDS *dies* O...M...GG... *dies again* |
 danielle 2/3/09 . chapter 1 WOW,WOW,WOW!thats really good please continue? :D |
 MikaBee2434LOVE 1/3/09 . chapter 1omg i love it i started to crack up lughing plz write a new chapter plzz |
 waterpologirl16 12/31/08 . chapter 1it would've been really cool if you showed them going to the fair. |
 Alice Cullens biggest fan ever 12/31/08 . chapter 1that was so funny |
 briiittx xhc 9/21/08 . chapter 1LOL!
Of course she just had to pass out!
Hehe!
But that story was pretty funny!
Poor Bella.
How the heck did she expect to escape them?
LOL!
Great story once again!
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 neveragain4evernow 8/22/08 . chapter 1poor bella |
 SeventeenForever 8/17/08 . chapter 1hahahaahahahhaaha! |
 bitten-sln 8/10/08 . chapter 1hahaa! dude that is so bella! and eew she threw up...anyways sweet :] |
 future emmett cullen 7/22/08 . chapter 1 aw,that was cute! |
 BellaBaby2813 7/11/08 . chapter 1i love this! Is it only a one shot? |