i check once a day for a few more words and once again you deliver. Ah life is good.

i have to agree, multiple arcs would be a thing of beauty.

You're doing such a wonderful job of keeping it emotionally realistic. There is no way Rally would just run after Bean and there's no way Bean would just declare their love. Those two have to do everything personal the difficult way.

So heres my little rah rah rah to keep you writing. Keep listening to Bean, I like his idea of driving while Rally shoots.

*Reads end of chapter 25*

OH BULLSHIT!

*cough*...um...ahem

I mean...I wasn't expecting that.

*sweatdrop*

Beautiful. You're a pure genius, I love this story, I've said all this fifty times already but repetition isn't always a bad thing! I can't wait to read more.

I was wondering how you would wrap up so many lose ends in two chapters. So feel free to write more.

GSC Trilogy? !

Well, I know good writing when I see it. You've written enough material for maybe two novels, not just one, and I'm amazed the story isn't over yet. I've just read the entire story (as it currently stands), a task which took hours. Like most people, if a story doesn't hook me, I won't want to read it. You've not only hooked me, you've impaled me on the hook and are reeling me in, so to speak. As an aspiring writer, may I say congratulations and that you've become a new source of inspiration. Don't worry, I won't plagiarize your work, but it'll take a long time to reach your level of creativity. Please write the conclusion soon. I'm dying to know how it ends, and whether it ends there or not. I admit, I hope you end this on a note similar to another story of yours, "Antidote." An ending that leaves the reader with a smile and a cheer. But I can't make you. I can only express an opinion. I now leave it to you to make your final decisions...

Ah! An update! What was it, like a year? I checked out of curiosity and you actually freakin updated... My God : p Glad to see you're back, and I can see the story is coming to a close. Chapter 23 was truly awesome. During the whole snapper and trapped-in-an-alley scene I could feel the tension and panic. Then when Bean arrived and the two fo them had their moment... just perfect. Like a sudden release where everything was alright again. _

I like the way it all went out in ch. 24 too. I hppe Bean doesn't really think Rally'd rather than Larry Sam than him though! He better come back around dammit. Oh, if you still need a beta reader, I love GSC like nothing else and have been obsessively reading Chasing The Dragon for quite a while. I've been thinking of going back and reading the whole thing from the beginning so let me know if you're interested

I can't think of a better way to do this. You know you're the greatest right? I want to tell you that I waited forever for this...and I didn't even know it was here. Mere happenstance that I should wander by desperate to see the next installment...and what do I get? Two installments.

Good lord what an explosive end to an explosive man. I hope it hurt. Poor Rally. This is going to be awful for her sleep patterns. You realize that I am going to read this about five more times right? You monopolize my time. LOL.

I would love to beta for you. I am a beta for the award winning RK fic "Prism" and "Harry Potter and the Acceptance of Fate". I hope you consider me as a good next beta for any other stories you might decide to give us because...well...You're the man. I mean woman...Well, you know what I mean.

Madame Manga, I want to have your baby. You are the best fanfic writer I've ever read. Now give me a big ol' romantic making up scene... hopefully within the year.

madame's writing at 160mph and not stopping for pedestrians. poor buff, i think your the only author to ever kill the buff. just like the manga excellent descriptions and explainations that fit smoothly into the story. now just how much will bean lose in vegas this time.

Yay! Double Yay!

I love the way Rally and Bean seem to "click" together like to halves of a whole.

This was a really great chapter. Good paceing, rood action. And you have such a great potential set up for Rally and Bean.

I just finished re-reading Antidote. I really liked the changes you made to it. I just hope there is a little more closure in this one. The relationship between them is so unique, that it really leaves you wanting to see them having some sort of future for them.

that was completely fantastic. i have no words. except that i'm darn glad there's another chapter!

It's the craziest thing... I started following this story since its first few chapters came out in my freshman year of college, and now I'm a month away from starting law school and still squeal with delight every time I check and find it updated. Thank you Madame, for your incredible action sequences, impeccable characterization, and, well, the naughty parts! I just hope the next part comes out before I get my J.D. in 07...

OMG! O.O! I been waiting for so long for this badass awesome superamazing...omg! bean and rally must live happily ever after to have gun-toting, car loving wee ones! or...kill them as you see fit...its your fic after all...-' if you dont mind me saying so and coming off all creepy...but i wub you