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| Tinyrocket 2008-08-23 ch 18,  | abuseCrane and Tank? HOORAY! It's them! This will be fun! (frowns) Anyway, I like to help you but I don't know the first thing to do. :( Sorry, I will try to help but I don't even know in which area. Please continue. |
| Tinyrocket 2008-08-22 ch 17, | abuseWhoa... This is really getting cool and creepy at the same time. And a fist fight between Violet and Penelope! Now THAT'S funny! XD Please continue. |
| Tinyrocket 2008-08-20 ch 16, | abuseDO A BARREL ROLL! XD Sorry, couldn't resist! Nice chapter! And sure hope everything will end up for all right for our heroes! Please continue! |
| Tinyrocket 2008-08-11 ch 15, | abuseLOL at Mewtwo writing complaint letters to the Smash Mansion! But I feel sorry for everyone. Especially Dot... :( Poor girl... Please continue... |
| Tinyrocket 2008-07-31 ch 14, | abuseHmm... Very interesting indeed! Please continue! I want to see how people like Linus are doing. |
| Tinyrocket 2008-07-25 ch 13, | abuseO__o Such language! Nice comical fight nonetheless! XD Please continue, pal! |
| Tinyrocket 2008-07-19 ch 12, | abuseSnoopy, you have every right to suspicious. Anyway, I hope for the best for Danglars who will be fighting Odin. I LOVE to see how this come out! |
| Tinyrocket 2008-07-10 ch 11, | abuseTsk tsk tsk. Danglars needs to work on his social skills. I LOVE to see how he gets himself out of this one. Please continue! XD |
| Tinyrocket 2008-07-07 ch 10, | abusePoor, poor POOR Tybalt... :( Poor Vaan too. Nice Chapter! Hmm... here is a good suggestion. You know Odin is right? Well, why don't you use him as a character. In form of a villain. In this story, he will a ruthless, uncaring violent mercenary who would slit a three-year-old's kid for a dime. You don't have to make him the main villain or a major one but you can put him similiar to Jr.Troopa from Paper Mario. The heroes have to face him a few times and the fights will get harder and harder. Only difference, Jr. Troopa actually looks like he is going easy on Mario compared to Odin's fighting. For now, let's say he fights with a scythe. But each battle, he brings new weapons and abilities. Unfortunately, HOW we can use him in plot, I haven't decided yet. I sure hopes that help. Have fun on your vacation! ^__^ |
| Tinyrocket 2008-07-06 ch 9, | abusePoor Tybalt... He have to hike his own pie... LOL! Nice chapter so far! Listen, I can give suggestions but you have to tell me what you have to tell me what you want to be to suggest. The plot? The characters? The battles? Please review reply and continue your story! ^__^ |
| Neros Urameshi 2008-07-06 ch 9, | abuseLooks to me that you have a ton of main characters in this ACFF3 story. Lilo: Heroes of Spades? Very interesting. Both: Please continue! |
| Tinyrocket 2008-07-03 ch 8, | abuseHmm... Here's an interesting way to raise money. A BAKE SALE! ^__^ I wonder what are they selling! Please continue! |
| Tinyrocket 2008-07-02 ch 7, | abuseSo if they touch each other, the universe is doomed... Great... This can't be end well. Please continue! |
| Tinyrocket 2008-06-29 ch 6, | abuse(shrugs) Cats will be cats... T__T Oh, I wonder why everytime they touched they get shocked. I mean I know why but still...? Please continue! ^__^ |
| Dragonfire411 2008-06-28 ch 6, | abuseWerid with all the shockyness (is that a word). Continue soon. ^_^ Crossovers are fun aren't they. See mine sometime. |