Nice, I really do like Riku's persona, though I usually think he's a jerk.
It's a fun idea, how Axel's the one who came up with the idea, and then Roxas and Riku are getting so excited and stuff.
Anyway, I'd be glad if you would update soon ^^

I dont know what it is about this story, but its got me completely wrapped around it, and Im not sure why its taken me so long to review (im sorry) because i must have read this over and over dozens of times. They way you've portayed all the characters makes them work so well together, and oh god, I cant stop reading this

You know what? I really like this. And I wish you'd continue it.

It's a good story. I really like it.

Roxas is an AMAZING character the way you write him.

~Akane

Wow, this story really touched me... it;s really beautiful. I hope you continue it.

I find it kind of rude if someone favorites a story without reviewing at least. So here is my review.

I love your writing style; it has a nice pace to it and sometimes goes off, but it just sort of fits, y'know? I ALSO love Axel wanting to start a band just to make Roxas happier and smile again. The fact that his Mother killed herself really makes it come together, and I don't think it's cliche or anything, because you use it well.

So, congrats, I am now another follower! I shall be stalking your profile now

I absolutely love this.
The plot is so good..I've read tons of other band fics that completely suck, but this actually has emotion.
I love how Axel's always about to cry for Roxas, and I want to pull my hair out when he gets off track with his revalation thoughts.
Ugh, it's so good. I cannot wait for your next update.
God, you're such an amazing writer. Ah.

Beautifully written. Pretty sure I am about to go read every single one of your other fics.

Wonderful job so far! Your style of writing is lovely, and I love, love the fact that you write in present tense. So few authors can pull it off well, but when they do, as you have definitely done, it makes the story all the more painfully intense and just..real. I'm really hoping that this story, unlike your others (or the ones I've read, anyway), is going to end happily. Or, you know, not depressingly. Update soon!

omg! you used my real name! (ihateyou)

and i think you changed the password because i can't log in here anymore...

:(

so you need to tell me who axel and roxas are. yeah. i read through the first part of this (really this time!) and alex wants to know who they are too. where are you getting this stuff from?!?! >:O

(and stfu ppl are reading this! you have like comments. and i'm giving you a comment even though it took me hours to find the stupid button at the BOTTOM of the page. alex says hi and he's confused.)

LOL. "It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved."

EVERYTHING. (no, not really, iloveyou. dontkillmeplz

I really hope Roxie decides to sing eventually.

This is a really entertaining story!

Brillaint , I love it
xx

I get the entire storyline, though I think you may want a beta reader. The only possible question I have is "Is Riku gonna keep multi-tasking?" I'm a drummer, myself, and I've tried it before, and it's just damn near impossible. Please don't answer the question, though. It's the questions that keep me interested.

I love it so far. I can't wait to see more.

LOL. Cute start for the a story! When will the nxt update be?!?

I WANT TO READ IT!

XD

Yay! I am so glad you posted this! And I am proud of myself for giving you confidence in it. I love this story so much. I forgot to mention that I love how you made Axel not like Larxene...uh...cuz I strongly dislike when people make him like her, or she's his current girlfriend, or fuck buddy, or ex-girlfriend. Stuff like that. How you described it after she kissed him was great. You could feel the dislike, yet it wasn't overdone. Just right. Every little scene you did in this is just wonderful in my opinion, I love each one and I think they set the feel for the story so well. I already see the relationship that Axel had with each person quite clearly and it's so intriguing. Of course, I can't wait for the next chapter.