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general zargon
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
I had no idea about that Blaster had a brother. Huh, you learn something new all the time. Anyway, this story is really well written, with good flow and character interaction, and I hope you finish it. Please keep up the good work and update as soon as you can.
darklink231
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
aw, poor bluestreak. i think he might go crazy if he can't talk! great job =D
ocean's pebble
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
This is fricken hilarious. I really hope you update soon, cause the Blue-torture anticipation has me hanging off of the edge of my seat! (not that I enjoy seeing Blue tortured... ::shifty look::)
Tentei-neechan
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
please please please update soon this is going to be great
RoseQuartzCasa
2009-05-16 . chapter 1
A very nice story, I can’t wait to see more! I love Bluestreak, and even though he’s not my top favorite Transformer he’s definitely up there. It’s always a treat to find good fanfics from his point of view. I like how you showed that even though Blue’s chatter can be relaxing or endearing, there are times when it’s just plain annoying or even destructive. I’d never seen Bluestreak’ mouth get him in this much trouble before though.

As always, I immensely enjoyed the banter between the Lambotwins. Sunstreaker liking Earth classic literature was unexpected, but surprisingly in character now that I think about it. I’m curious to see how Bluestreak’s bet with Blades is going to turn out. I honestly don’t know if he can keep quiet for three days.

There’s a lot I could say about this chapter, but that would take forever, so I’ll wrap it up with the statement that I’ve enjoyed this story immensely so far, and hope to see more soon. There were some instances where you forgot commas here and there, but all in all very well written. Good job!

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RoseQuartzCasa
Zab Jade
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
This is a great story so far, and I really love your portrayal of Puppybot (my nickname for Bluestreak). Are you going to continue it? (has her Bluestreak toy give puppy dog eyes)
bbratteberget
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
Are you going to add another chapter to this one?
I really enjpyed reading it!
Sotwt
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
Poor BlueXD

Is there a sequel?
justcallmeageek
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
I love it, it made me laugh so hard. Are you gonna continue it?
Ashana
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
Beautiful written and immensely entertaining. I hope you can continue this soon!
Youko Rayah
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
what are the chances of continuing this? I'd love to read the rest, and the fall out of this should be really good! just how big is the damage going to be to all involved?
itachi-hinata
2008-10-06 . chapter 1
I remember that I once sent a review before... if you could even call that a review, anyways I like the Idea of Blue having to talk to keep the memoeries of the past from driving him insane so I really really really want you to write the next chappie please (best hurt puppy dog look ever) o something that I had going through my mind after I read this the first time maybe a little twinblue could be added... just to have there be someone to learn about what happens to Blue... just a thought though and again please
flamingmarsh
2008-08-19 . chapter 1
oh I like this. More please. poor Blue though. what happens if the Decepticons attack and he's injured or if he has a nightmare? he wouldn't be able to talk.
sadisticb00gers-Modus Pwnage
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
*Gasp* I WANT MOAR! this is really excellently written. Plot gathering, flow, character detail...great. I love how you make up gossip for Blue to blab out, like Prowl and Grimlock. Please update?
Starshinesoldier
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
Poor Bluestreak, he didn't mean any harm! ... he's not gonna to insane is he? -worries- I hope you'll update soon! I can't wait to see what happens!
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