Squirly, you need a smack upside the head! This is a great chapter! I really like the relationships you show between the characters, it's a pleasure to read. I do hope your muse comes back to fan fiction soon, but if not, thank you for the stories you've written so far. I have truly enjoyed your work.

oh tell me your gonna do more abby/grant ?
-k-

Oh I'll pray your Muse returns post haste. I enjoy all of your writing so much. Besides your the one that got me hooked on NCIS. Never heard of it until I read this story now I own all 5 seasons. I think you've captured the atmosphere of the show perfectly. Great Chapter But still a little bit of evil there... what a place to leave someone hanging Grant and Tony alone...

ooh I really like this!! I loved the whole interaction with Tony and Mars and Abby that was so cool.

Poor Gibbs, or poor Fornell, they are both gaining another DiNozzo:)

Just one thing-wasn't Jethro (the dog) an apprehension dog? Cause the first one was the actual drug dog but the handler needed it to seem like the dog was still alive and so got an attack dog?

I may be wrong and you know artistic license and all^_^

~~RM

I really like it, I've never seen Without a Trace, but you make Grant blend in seamlessly with the team and the entire premise of the show. Also like how despite the Abby/Grant you've got going, there still seems to be some Gabby (if you didn't mean that part, chalk it up to an overactive Gabby-fed imagination!)

The dynamics between Tony and Grant are interesting, and I don't know whether to hope that in the end Gibbs requests a transfer or not (since otherwise I'll be expecting him on the show!)

great one glad you updated again

Great Update!

I'm so glad to see this story updated! Poor Tony, he's feeling threatened by Grant on all sorts of levels and catching hell (and headslaps)from Gibbs for it. Love the cliffhanger ending--my guess is McGee.

Oh evil child what a cliffhanger you have left us with... Sorry meant evil cliff hanger..I think? Great Chapter. Gibbs has to steal Grant away from Fornell or threaten to give him Tony. Wonderful interaction (Of all the characters)!

Great chapter. Gibbs and Tony are great. Would love to see Tony and Grant show everyone how good they are together as partners. They need to go off on their own then get into trouble with Gibb and Fornell. They act like kids together anyway, like twins. more please.

this is a funny story. geat job so far. Can't wait til the next chapter!

Go Abby! Loved Ducky explanation. Great Chapter

Hm... I'm extremely curious to find out where you're going with this... This Grant character - I like him one minute, then I can't stand him the next. He's got me - befuddled. :)

Excellent chapter! Can't wait for the next!
SSW

It´s great, but I have no idea where you´re going with it. Can´t wait for your next update.

Grant had better not be messing around with Ziva when he's just kissed Abby. Grant and Abby are good together - two timing is awful. It was a good chapter though.