Ooh. Vickie, I didn't know you had a fanfiction on this? >w< Good thing Hatter-chan read through your artwork more thoroughly on Deviantart. Speaking of which, would you mind being of help and criticizing Hatter's own stories. I believe I need help. -w-

Ooh! As always, good as ever. Does this mirror the game play idea you sent me too?

Oh my gosh i'm glad Ifound this! I can't wait for Alix to come in to the picture!

Weh another place where I can leave senseless comments and ramble as if there's no tomorrow! XD
I like the way you write. It's quite elegant but still very entertaining. When I read it I imagined Kain talking to the Reaver...which he shouldn't do when he's in company or people could get funny ideas. Keep going! Can't wait for Alix!

That was great!

Spectacular use of words and just enough information to darw you inn. I love it. I'm eager to see how this metropolis looks like and functions.

But...the Hylden are being used as the bad guys again *likes Hylden too much*

Lol, don't know if it'd be imprudent to write a reivew for a chapter I helped write in the first place or not, BUT I DON'T CARE! MUAHAHAHAHA! I SHALL REVIEW ANYWAY IF ONLY TO RAISE THE NUMBER IN AN UNDERHANDED AND VERY UNFAIR MANOR! XD!

BTW, my computer's up and running again, but if you sent a reply to the e-mail I sent you yesterday I don't think I got it. You probably didn't because I THINK my e-mail's working but I wanna make sure...

Send me a note ASAP then! Ja!

make that three sequals in one day =). Nice vocabulary, Vickie. Just to clarify, Moebius is called both BEFORE and AFTER the pillars collapse. Young fledgling Kain kills him before toppling the pillars. The pillars are then destroyed. After that, the Elder God ressurects moebius and brings him into the spirit forge in the Vampire Citadel. This is where elder kain murders him. Moebius would have been revived a third time, had Raziel not sucked his soul prior. Make sure to have a completely firm understanding of the events, it makes the continuity of the story much stronger! =) Great job so far.

Wow, what are the odds you and I post a sequel to defiance the same day. Nice vocabulary and metaphors, I'm interested to see where this is going. However, i wanted to bring one thing to your attention that i barely caught myself. Did you notice that Kain killed Moebius AFTER The Pillars were destroyed by his decision not to kill himself in Defiance? Just a thought it might be something you'd like to think about.