Incrediabley amusing. 9/10 for the fic.

Well! So here I am finally (you're not the only one I've been neglecting, if it's any consolation, lol). Gorgeous first paragraph, but (GOD I am pathetically predictable) I got a grin out of her defining it as "Rodney-brilliance" and dear Carson's reaction. Also his one-up-manship with John locking the door and... eh. It's a revolting hour of the morning so I shall shut up with this aimless impersonation of a review and simply say that it was a very good prequel for a very good sequel and if that makes sense, you're more awake than I am right now!!

I absolutely love this story!! it is so hilarious and I can't wait to have the time to read So I Married a Chair! bravo!

Hey really I loved this story and would be very interested in more stories with "King" Carson and his little familie!!

You'd better keep writing this 'ship! Please, for all of us Beckett/Nena addicts out there.

ME. I'M INTERESTED. Write more. Please. You have to, this ship is just too good.

I laughed out loud many times in this chapter. Zelenka is brillant, and the part with Heightmeyer was great. Carson does sound a little bit like he's gone off the deap end, if you don't here the other half of the conversation like us readers can. I always felt sorry for what happened to Heightmeyer. She deserved better. And the part where Carson says "as long as we don't name her after Rodney", considering what she actually gets named, was so funny!!

So, to sum up, you must write more. There's no sense in letting your talent and your amazing ship go to waste :-)

Aw poor Carson. Nena was just a little too strong for him that time. I laughed my head off when he freaked out about her advances. Poor guy! He had a right to freak out. The chair was WAY beyond just making passes at him.

I always save this story for last when a new chapter comes, cuz I want to savour it. Just one more? You could always add a couple more... I wouldn't object... :-)

Heheh to John and Rodney!

Also, this: "He never did enjoy mysteries, especially if certain older brothers ripped out the last pages to his detective novels." Just made me laugh. Poor Carson!

"And then the king of the potato people gave you a magic flying carpet."

Was it a little three-seater?

(P.S Wonderful job with Carson's accent, and I totally love the rivallry between the science and medical departments.)

Aw... poor confused Carson! Nena probably doesn't realize that she's going too fast for the average human male. And as much as I love Carson, that's what he is. A human male. She needs to give him some space to digest this information. Which includes not locking him out/freezing the city/sinking the city until he has had time to process it. He does love you, Nena, but he just needs time to think about it :-P

The part about Rodney sleepwalking was funny! And being in denial was even funnier. What's in that Athosian fruit I wonder...

Biro fun! M observatory *cough*McKay/Weir*cough*. Poor Nena, Carson is so oblivious/in denial.

Lol to Jinto and Wex. Nice to have some interaction with them

Really good. It does remind me how I wish they'd done something decent with the city on the show, though I don't think we'd have gotten this, rofl.

LOL, I loved your commentary on the human male! (And the Rodney snark, but hey, this is me, and he's such a twit). Poor old Carson, it's a bit unfair when the woman you love has quite SO much influence over your daily life...! *grins*

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Or a... sentient city scorned. Honestly, Carson, what were you thinking? But their making up was cute, and they have learned something about one another. It's good that Nena figured out how far she can go with Carson, and that she has true feelings for him.

The crack about football/soccer made me giggle. As did the image of our favorite Scot in his swimming shorts.

Great job, as usual! Looking forward to the next chapter!