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| RngrThorne 2008-07-10 ch 11,  | abuseOh, this was twisted. Nicely done. |
| Dierhart 2008-07-10 ch 11, | abuseThat was fun! The multiple endings was sort of like watching Clue! Thanks for another great story! |
| reallyneedsahobby 2008-07-10 ch 11, | abuseit was good, but how come whenever the younger Daria closed the flaps to the box, she never went to the future? |
| Dierhart 2008-07-08 ch 7, | abuseBattle of the "Amy's"? It would be interesting to see who knew more about Jake and Helen - Amy or Daria. Amy might know more about the past, but Daria might have a better idea of what's going on in the time they're currently at. She might be able to pull off the phone call from Amy as someone playing a prank, or she might have to admit she's from the future...to which I can see Jake and Helen having her committed...and there's nothing like being stuck in an asylum in the past to ruin what should be your present. The future is looking grim. If Jane the Younger recalls these stock tips, I see a rise in fortune for the Lane family. It will be a sad day if the artsy Lane's go down the rich and powerful route. I'd like to think that money wouldn't change them, but affluence does have a habit of bringing out the worst in fictional characters. Quinn's believing in fairies who want her to study hard and be nice to her sister. I'm seeing her fashion club days stripped away from her - there's no way Sandi will stand for her being a bookworm who loves her older sister. Daria couldn't stand it when Quinn was a pseudo-intellectual before, how will she feel growing up with one? Lawndale's about to get turned on its head, I can't wait! |
| geega-pax 2008-07-07 ch 7, | abuseBusted omg I love this story, but how will what Quinn and Jane are telling there younger selves change the future. Please tell me you are gonna have Daria prove to be from the future by bring up the time Jake and Helen spent a night in jail in Boulder in August, 1969 and the time Helen punched out a cop. Love your work and style keep it up can't wait to read chapter 8 |
| BlazeStryker 2008-07-07 ch 6, | abuseAngst has its place, but usually that's the roof of the Xavier Institute. I like it as an accent at best, personally, something that leads to a better result in the end. |
| Dierhart 2008-07-06 ch 6, | abuseWow, Quinn's telling her younger self to study and treat Daria nicely? They're definitely going to mess with the timeline if they keep this up...can't wait to see how the present is going to look once they return from the past! |
| Karma84 2008-07-04 ch 5, | abusei hope there will be more, i enjoy this story. |
| tommy214 2008-07-02 ch 4, | abuseLoving It! Can't wait for more. But you forgot the 'crap' reference in this chapter :( Or is that just too predictable? |
| Dierhart 2008-06-30 ch 3, | abuseStories like this are the reason you're one of my favorite authors on this site. Would that I had half your vision... |
| Caira 2008-06-30 ch 2, | abuseOh, now this is a hoot . . . |
| Dancing With Hitler 2008-06-27 ch 2, | abuseOh damn, I love time travel stories. And Daria. |
| Mike Yamiolkoski 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseIntriguing! Looking forward to seeing how this goes. |