Hello,

This story is great.

Great chapter, talk about one surprise after another in this chapter, please, please up date soon

Great chapter again. I for one, enjoy the monstrous chapters as you called them, lol! So I'm looking forward to more soon hopefully?!

Very well set up and I want to read more it was just too long of chapter and now I have to go save my kids from drowning in the bathtub.

I'll read more soon.

Kelli

This is great. I can't believe the amount of characterisation and detail you've managed to put in. I'm really looking forward to more. I'm a J/S shipper all the way and I just loved their thoughts when they just touched hands. Very sweet!

great chapter, please up date soon

great chapter, please, please up date soon

great chapter, please, please up date soon

Excellent update. Nice descriptive action scenes. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great...long chapter as for joilnar well i think she would go into portmouth insteed of Sam... just a thought

Nice job. Very interesting story. Looking forward to About Waters Calming down part 2.

great chapter, please, please up date soon

great story and chapter so far, i read the part where hoe william purpose to her, it remind me of couple i know over in the states. Chris and Jenni. chris is in the air force and Jenni is in the navy. they meet on the 'enterprise' well any way when chris return back state side, we talk on the net and got a change to meet Jenni. any way i found out one day that when the ship dock at san diego he was there in his dress blues waiting for her, when he did see her he gave her dozen red roses, box of chocolates then he got down on one knee and purpose to her in front of all her ship mates, captain and thier families. they all clap and cheer when she said 'yes' and saw that he slip ring on her fing then stood up and hug and kiss her then dip her in front of every one. they are now married with twin 8 month old twin girls Alison (name after me) and Samantha (After Samantha Carter)

Very very interesting. Hehe. Looking forward to more. :)

way to go nee-san cant wait to see the rest