Oh wow, poor girl, she has no luck does she? This was really starting to make me cry its quite sad; and Walter does have too much time on his hands... how does he do it?
I'm really interested in what's to come, hope to be able to read the next chapter soon. :3

Could you please update/ this is one of the best stories that I've read in ages!

aww laila, poor girl, integra is a BITCH, anyways please update son!

I absolutely loved this story when i found it. I couldnt stop reading. Laila is so kick ass. I have no complaints or any critiques cuz it wuz all good.
Cant wait for an update!

this is really good please right more its really good

Saxculs girlfriend: O_O Holy crap, that chapter was amazing 8D ! I bow to you! You captured everything into a detailed, sensuous way! Nice job and keep up the good work!

oh, thats ok. you're forgiven for your brain fart. so long as the next chapter comes out (but not after too much time... like, 6 months), i'll be happy.

this was pretty cool... and i think Laila is pretty much fucked now... "Bye Laaila! Have a nice time!" BOOM!

Too Bad, So Sad.

my 7th sense is telling me there is going to be pain and torture in the next chapter... and if im lucky, blood shed...!
WOO!

yes, i need a straight jacket... and bad.

i shall see you next chapter... ^^

~clusterlizard1

WHOA WELCOME BACK! -huggles- Congrats on your stats hun, me and Red and Ella missed you!
Red: -frowns- Missed who?
Ella:-slaps Red- Aduur, we missed pie.
Me: -eyes widen- ZOMG I LOVE PIE!

ONTO THE STORY!

Me and Ella: -stare at Red with wide eyes- RED! NO MEANS NO! -Ella whacking Red with giant fish-
Me: Where'd ya get the fish from??
Ella: -shrugs- Your mind.
Me: -nods-
Red: -glares- She wanted it, she was just being a pain in the ass like you two are! Besides, neither of you listen to me when I say no.
-giggles-
Me: Um Red?
Ella: You never say no.
Me: WHO GO LAILA! WORK THOSE SHADOWS!
Ella: THEN TEACH ME HOW TO DO IT!!
Me: NO, DON'T TEACH HER!!
Red: It's more fun to watch her struggle and fail.
-Me and Ella turn to Red-
-Red dissapears-

Me: -sighs- I wish I was good at computers.
Ella: -patpat- You are, I mean you can turn them on so that's a plus.
Me: -nods- true, thanks hun.
Ella: -squeals- SERAS!! HI, ITS ME!! -jumps up and down waving her arms-
Me: -facepalm- She can't see you Ella.
Ella: -frowns- Why not? Is she blind?
Me: O.o Yes Ella, Seras is now blind.
Ella: oh, poor thing.
Me: Are you crying?
Ella: -sobs- No.
Me: Oh...Kay... Then moving on.

Me: -glomps Laila- Don't worry baby, Red's gone to get you now.
Ella: -frowns- Or he's gone to kill you.
Me: -hisses- Shut up Ella.
Ella: -looks offended- But that's just who he is. He'll either kill her or save her, that's why we love the sick and twisted son of a bitch.
Me: -nods- True.
Ella: -wraps arm around my shoulders- Either way, Red'll come back to us soon and he'll either bring his new wife or a body we can feast on.
Me: -blinks- And which one do you want?
Ella: -grins- Both are great presents.
Me: My god you're one twisted vampire.
Ella: -huggles- That's because you made me.
Me: -glares- I'M NOT TWISTED!
Ella: -laughs-
Me: -pouts-
Ella: -stops laughing- Oh dear christ you're serious! -looks around in alarm- WHAT DO I DO?!?
Red: -pops in- Run.
-Ella runs away-
Red: You are one twisted bitch. -Disappears-
Me: -looks around- Am I twisted?
Mr. Anderson: -laughs- You're a twisted, poor excuse for a Catholic, bitch.
Me: -beats the crap out of Mr. Anderson with a lead pipe in the conservatory-
Mr. Anderson: -whimpers- See.
Me: -looks down at his broken and bloody body- Huh. Go figure. They're right.


LOVED THIS CHAPPIE AND ONCE AGAIN WELCOME BACK MY LOVE!
YAY I GOTS A NAME!
lol, now peas review R&H for me -flutters lashes-
Mr Anderson: REVIEW WHORE!
Me: -whacks him again-
SORRY I TOOKED SO LONG, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE!


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Mercenary of the Twisted Triad, Angil, The Mentally Insane One.

Hahahaha. Awesome. Call me DDEC btw. It's bothersome to write out my penname after all, and I know who you'll be referring to. Wow, I love this. A short chappie, but hey, it happens. Alucard is not gonna be happy, eh? Poor Laila. I like her, she's so kickass! Whho! I'm feeling a bit hyper, soory. Oh and Gomen also because I didn't review sooner. Effing life. Whatever. See ya later!
DDEC

OMFG! Firstly...WOW! OMG SO BRILLIANT! I LOVE THIS STORY SO YOU BETTER WRITE MORE!! PLEASE I AM BEGGING! Also, that girl has some SPUNK! and i thought MY character was bad XD seems she's constantly fighting *sniff* poor Laila then again she did deserve it for hurting Alucard lol although he rarely gets pained! OMFG WRITE SOME MORE SOON!
Alucard: Listen to the girl, she's annoying enough!
Me: Oy! I resent that!!

Nice Chappie, Alucard is a sexy damn thing I don't know how Laila can beat him off I guess it's a really hard thing to do!
I wonder what are they going to do to Laila after all the mess she did, poor girl..

Now, i'll be critic. This fiction is defintely intersting, but it's not very readable. The pace is frenetic at times and too slow in some moments, while the construcion of the frases is usually messy and confusing. The story is desacrating towards Hellsing characters, and this is good, but you're making i mistake i had to face many times, you're making your original character a messiah;
i suppose she'd be some sort of your alter-ego, but she fits a bit too much in the stereotype of the "powerful and clever, but restrained by institutions" which doesn't go along well with Hellsing.
It's clear that you tried to insert elements for the actual Hellsing plot only around the last chapters, and this gives a feeling of extraniation and makes your story sound a bit riff-raff.
Anyway there are some intersting ideas, i believe something beautifl could come out of this in the end.

walter definetly has way to much time on his hands >.< that would just be horrible to experience.

integra needs more than a slap and alucard honestly needs to stop these things from happening in the first place -_- clueless lovesick puppy that he is.

chapter was good though.

Youy know, there's something in your way of writing that reminds me the style of a friend of mine, very... impatient, you can fit a lot of sensations and events in a small period. There's even something close to my own style. I'm definitely going to read all of this fiction... i hope you'll give an eye to mine.

update again soon