Well, once again you've managed to make me cry and smile). This was another very touching story and I'm glad I decided to go ahead and read it. I'll go read and review 'Welcome Home Tamir' now.

P.S. Do you ever write happy stories? lol, I'm just kidding with you :D

Hey there! Lauren here. i Hope you're doing well. I just read your story about Sadira's past. It was wonderful and very believable! Sadira was always my favorite on the Aladdin TV Series. She reminded me a lot of myself, minus the whole magic thing.

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Lauren

Okay, I decided not to stop. That dream was touching, especially when I learned Sadira's mother dropped her off at the orphanage as if she didn't want her.

The Scorpion's attempt to explain why Sadira ran off I enjoyed as well. That sort of speech would appeal to plenty of people...and I'm glad Jasmine wasn't fooled.

Aisha is dead? Oh, no...I liked her so much.

The mournful ending is moving, and I begin to question the same things Sadira does. I like the conflict going on between rich and poor and most importantly, the question "why?
A nice story to get me thinking!

Wow, finding time to read is harder than I thought it would be. But I'm here! Thanks for responding to my thanks as well!

I love the last line!

Aisha is a great character; I enjoy how she puts others first even when she's starving. And, of course, I like Sadira watching out for her. I have a faint recollection of my other favorite characters through them, so I love them even more. The bond they share is an easy one.

You do too good a job of making me dislike the Scorpion. What a great name for her, too.

Yasir...as if he could break Sadira. I love Sadira's spirit and I think the simile of her being like a wild horse is a good one.
Oh, I was so sad that Sadira left Aisha. I hope we see that frail girl again!

A nice chapter, and I hope to find some more time to go online soon!

Aw...poor Sadira...I always did think of her as one of the nicer "villains." She just wanted to be loved...

I love this fic, please keep it up.

Really good story!I hope u write more stories..It was good that u chose something different,again a very good story _

Again this is a masterpiece.I really love your writing thoughts and emotions were portrayed very well in this one and i think that with the situation and characters made it really work!

nice job- i think that you made the sultan a little *too* dumb, however. it is part of a rulers job to know about the people, and i'm sure he knew there were poor, homeless people on the streets. He probably wasn't aware of how it felt to be that way, but still. Also, Sadira was portrayed perfectly, because your story reflected how strong and loyal she is. Nice job.

I think you've really characterized Sadira very well, not to mention the Sultan. And even though I loved the movie, the Sultan was always a fool who didn't understand anything. _

Excellent story! It really seems to tie into the show's plotline nicely. Keep up the good work!