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Oh. I'm sorry. I just forgot how to speak English for a moment there.

Loosely translated, I'm decently sure the gibberish above means, "Bravo, jolly good. That was Hot and wonderful in all ways that it should be."

Especially loved the ending.
Oh. Oh my.

*pants*

A perfect story, perfect!^^

I enjoyed this very much and only have one question:
Will there be a part two?

OH MY GOD! that was AMAZING!

The intimacy itself was described well, but the way they were acting...It was in-character, but it was more like their fourteen year-old selves than seventeen year-olds.

This is really quite adorable. Shy Snape is positively wonderful!

I like your writing - smooth, communicative, sweet.

One word: Wow. I've read tons of fics like this one, and this HAS to be the best one ever. It's just too cute for words, it really is. The first time I read it, I was in the school library, and you really don't know how hard it was for me not to jump up and sqeal at the adorableness of it without everyone staring. I read it again now that I'm at home (How could I resist? :D) and now I'm pratically dancing around the house. It's also reallyy hot. And it's hard to write a fic that's cute AND hot without it getting sappy, and you did it perfectly. I also LOVE your Sevvie. Fwe.

cool story!! i like the thought that sev and lily had a history together!

very good. I simply enjoyed it, although to me it ended too soon.
Herb3

Aw!
. . .
It's really well written, believable, almost.

OMG I loved this! I loved your version of Sev

Very well put-together, again Bravo.

This fic confirms my theory that the best things in life have no nutritional value whatsoever.

Seriously - ohmigod, look at all the lovely S/L perviness! The hormonal chemistry and the sexual tension between the two characters is just amazing. You really captured the sensuality of the situation ::hugs fic::

Why do you do this to me? *I* am going to die of deprivation now.

i too loved the "no nutritional value" and the small voice inside the trousers lines.
I actually liked the whole thing... is that bad?...