Reviews for Reverberations

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Sharon 2008-07-20 ch 15,	abuseI thoroughly enjoyed this! As usual you did an awesome job keeping the storyline moving and capturing just the right emotion of our favorite characters. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future!
Sharon 2008-07-20 ch 11,	abuseHoly smokes! I didn't expect to see this scene again quite so soon! Your ability to keep your readers off balance is one of your many strengths as a writer. I'm SO happy I don't have to wait for the next chapter!
Acquamarina 2008-07-20 ch 15,	abuseGreat story, Z! Thank you for sharing.
sydcasy 2008-07-20 ch 15,	abuseLoved the story :) Can't wait to read more of your work!
Patty 2008-07-19 ch 15, anon.	abuseThank you, Z. This has been a marvelous story. Ordinarly flashbacks give me trouble but your prompt updates and clear descriptive scenes set the stage each time and I stayed focused just fine. Of course, I wanted to break your neck occasionally with the cliff-hangers but the next chapter would be so interesting I forgot all about the impending mayhem. I enjoyed Alan's feeble attempt to get mad at Don for keeping secrets from him. Typical loving father, always wanting to keep his chick (even though an adult) safe from harm. I gotta admit too I sorta lost focus on the story when you mentioned Charlie looking like a sleepy child when he woke up. Ah, the image! I found myself smiling along with Alan and Don. Until the next story springs forth from that fertile brain of yours, I remain your faithful fan, Patty
Rinne 2008-07-19 ch 15,	abuseGreat ending.
Sharon 2008-07-19 ch 9,	abuseSuch a great story you've got unfolding! In a past chapter, I love the hesitation Colby and David have in approaching Don with the information that the three agents who've handled the Gillis case are dead. Not exactly the news you want to share with your boss! Hooray for Charlie coming to Don's apartment and confronting his brother for an explanation. The conversation was very believable and included just the right amount of levity. Moving on to the next chapter!
ALEO 2008-07-19 ch 15,	abuseThe hardest part of a fic, the wrap up and of course you have done it nicely. I will certainly catch the next one!
Magister Equitum 2008-07-19 ch 15,	abuseOh, what a closing line. I think that means the most with the 'at home and away'. It's important to have both. This has been a fantastic story from you, Z. I really can't wait to see what you have next.
capjack54 2008-07-19 ch 15,	abuseMost excellent. 'Don or Charlie in the hospital' scenes can get repetitive, but this one moved quickly and turned down the sap factor. I am only left wanting for more. Maybe Gillis can escape lockup? And there's also the tiny detail that Don still has a hit out on him by the Russian mob. Ah, well... even if it ends here, I am very much impressed by your writing. Amen!
Ms.GrahamCracker 2008-07-19 ch 15,	abuseWonderful ending! Applause! Applause! I loved Charlie's statement that he would just work on the other Milennium Problems if he ever solved P vs NP. Isn't that what life is all about? Just a continuation of the same thing. And it is good when you love your job. Sorry to see this one end, but I'm already looking forward to your next one. Hope it is soon. 'Til then.
JennK528 2008-07-19 ch 15,	abuseYAY! Another terrific story! Brilliantly wrapped up with all the boys together at the end. Just the way it should be. g (Btw, if it's any consolation, I shut my eyes during the gory scenes in Supernatural, too. I'm a real wimp!)
simanis 2008-07-19 ch 15, anon.	abuseKudos Zub. Enjoyed this story much. Nice ending.. thanks and till we meet again eh?
capjack54 2008-07-18 ch 14,	abuseYay! Don got his guy! Maybe... with you, we can never be sure what will happen to poor Don next... ^_^
Ms.GrahamCracker 2008-07-18 ch 14,	abuse"You could let him go and we could shoot you anyway," Colby said dryly. PERFECT! This chapter had everything (except Charlie)! I loved the action, the comments Don made while being held hostage, his thought process when Gillis promises to let him go (again). And, the end, when he asks David to "...go tell Dad I'm okay, would you?" just took my breath away. Well done, very well done. I really hate to see this story end.

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