This is one of the funniest things I have ever read! I hope you make more! :)

This Chap was 2 funni my aunt was lookin at me like i was crazii 4 brustin out laughing

This is so wrong, but funny too, lol

after reading through the whole 53 chapters you have so far, I feel I must convey a congratulations to you. it is difficult to write a story so perverse without going into details. I commend you for it and hope that you may find the inspiration to continue it, as I have had many a good laugh over it.

You know, Ryouga's obsession with Ranma really does seem plausible...I like it. If Ryouga really did act like that, and since he's physically stronger than Ranma I'd love to see him dominate Ranma in both forms!

'sans' means without in French and that's why your sentence didn't make sense.

[Kasumi knew that she was next, sans the dozens of apartment guides sitting on the kitchen counter. Kasumi frantically flipped through them, but the more she looked, the more discouraged she became.]

You could have used; as a result, for that reason,
accordingly, and so, consequently, ergo, for, forasmuch as, for this reason, hence, inasmuch as, in consequence, in that event, on account of, on the grounds, since, so, then, thence, therefore, thereupon, thus, to that end, whence, wherefore...

Basically you needed an adverb.

Nice story by the way! I'm not flaming you, just helping you. I really like your story.

Could you try and make a Side-Story to this chapter where Ranma-Chan succeds in eating the SuperSoba. Then he has his way with girls and guys from just about every anime that occurs on modern earth, then after that have Ranma go to America for some conquests in the DC/Marvel world. Wonder what Ranma-chan's villainess name would be? Maybe Succubus?

Aw, why'd you stop? I started out just reading it for the interesting title but it's really grown on me. Somehow ( and you get god status in my book) you managed to string together a bunch of lemons and limes into a coherent and enthralling plot. It's so much fun to read I read it three times. I sincerely look forward to the next chapter.

Enraptured,
YuriFan5

good chapter

good chapter

nice start

Cool

Interesting chapter... makes sense for Herb to do something that stupid and have it backfire on her.

The seven year wait was worth it! Though I hope the next chapter comes out in less than a year XD

Ah, always good to read passages from Tha Masta (SHO'NUFF).

Although the monstrous format was hell for my pure eyes, it was good to have Herb back in the mix.

Hoping you don't keep us waiting seven years for the next one, Make Mine Marvel!