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camlann
2008-08-09 . chapter 28
Wow, that was sort of a race to the finish line with those last chapters, huh? I guess you just couldn't wait, had to post the last few at the same time! LOL! That's okay, I don't mind a bit! Nice way to close it all up happily--I'm glad the little nawal boy made it out safe and sound. Oh, and I loved the detail about Dean whittling the little Impala for him--too cute! Too bad Ix Chel couldn't help Sam out more with their problem, but maybe she'll come up with something in a sequel story?? LOL! Anyways, great job!

camlann :)
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-09 . chapter 28
Awesome ending to a terrific story! I like how you mentioned the changes Sam has gone through and the memories made before the deal ends.Excellent work, a wonderfully developed story with amazing fine detailing. Can't wait to read more stories from you!Thank you for this gem!
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-09 . chapter 27
Aw!Perfectly written and great setting of the mood,sweet chapter!
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-09 . chapter 26
Poor exhausted brothers,nice descriptions and touch with all the detailing,I felt very much as if I were there.
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-09 . chapter 25
I loved Dean's emotions in this chapter,and the epic climax you built up to, pure awesomeness!
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-07 . chapter 24
I loved the overall tone you used, like the calm and beauty before the storm. It was just, amazing! Can't wait to read more and find out just what Sam did.
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-06 . chapter 23
ANother awesome chapter!Hope Sammy can pull this off!:D
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-06 . chapter 22
Very interesting how you added the ghosts bit,awesome idea!I liked Sam's emotions and his work at being the shaman here,nicely done.The little boy sounds so cute,I feel so bad for him!:(
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-06 . chapter 21
Great chapter!Very intense with high emotion at the end!Nice work!
camlann
2008-08-05 . chapter 22
Sorry I haven't reviewed lately! I'm still enjoying the story immensely! Can't wait to see if they get past the wall of the dead in the next chapter without Dean having to steal energy from Sam to go all jaguar again. LOL! I'd be totally cool with that, by the way, just in case that's where you were thinking of going. Poor little nawal boy--he's not looking so good. Anyways, love the speedy updates--looking forward to the next!

camlann :)
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-03 . chapter 20
Great chapter! And what are the boys doing with explosives, this never ends well...:P
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-02 . chapter 19
Another awesome chapter,yay to Dean being free! Love the brotherly banter yet feline love, excellent stuff!
LoupGarouAngel
2008-08-02 . chapter 18
Great chapter, serves Bela right!
LoupGarouAngel
2008-07-29 . chapter 17
Awesome chapter! Your detailing of scents, sounds and character descriptions were perfect! Poor Dean,with the flying, the catnapping and all! Can't wait for the next chapter!Seriously excited here, excellent job!
LoupGarouAngel
2008-07-22 . chapter 16
Poor Dean getting hauled off and leaving Sammy all alone,he better kick Bela's ** as soon as he gets her!Loved the chapter,great Sam emotion and the scene with Dean being hauled off was just awesome!
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